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    Temper, Temper Chapter 9

    Bette paced up and down the office then suddenly stopped and turned to Walter her face ashen “My gallery, fuck, my gallery – the press were outside all the time, it would be easy for J.J. to locate. Come on we’ve got to go now!”

    Without any further thought they jumped into Bette’s car and headed round to the gallery. At first the gallery appeared to be in darkness then Bette noticed two things, a faint glow coming from under her office door and the broken glass from the door’s side panel. On closer inspection she could see the wires dangling from the alarm and she just knew that Tina was inside and in danger. Bette tried to head through the door but Walter grabbed her arm “Bette stop we need to call the police and wait for them to get here”.

    Bette wrenched her arm free – “You can wait for the cops Walter I’m going in now, I know Tina is in there and in danger.” As Bette moved swiftly into the gallery Walter took out his cell phone and called the police.

    J.J. walked over to Tina and sat on the desk in front of her, “Honey, I know that you had to come over here to take this case but now it’s time for you to go back home. I followed everything on the net and I saw the shot of you and you’re client hugging at the end of the case. I know how you can fall for your client Tina, that’s how come we are lovers so I’ve decided to get rid of my competition. She seems smart this Bette Porter, she’ll figure out we’re here eventually and then she’ll come to look for you – and I’ll be waiting for her!” With that she reached behind her and pulled a handgun from her belt.

    Tina’s eyes widened in horror and she tried desperately to talk, struggling to free her mouth and her trapped limbs. J.J. simply reached out and gently stroked Tina’s hair “Shush now honey she’ll soon be gone and we can go back home”. Tina screamed behind the tape and J.J. looked at her with concern before reaching across and removing the tape. She was instantly met with a verbal barrage from Tina.

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    1. OMG… i was getting a little worried there and so glad the police got there fast and that JJ is no longer in the picture… a nice vacation is in order… love this story… keep it going… thanks

    2. Boy, JJ was some kinda crazy, totally and very seriously disturbed. If at all possible, the case against the other young woman that Tina had been on should be re-opened and all charges dropped because that could ruin her life forever.Now that the truth is known they should reverse that case without any problems. Now our girls get to have a care-free life with just your everyday problems. Hopefully. Great update. Thanks for posting.

    3. This chapter was so fast… Maybe you should have spread this over two or three chapters so things could be a little more detailed? I liked it, but I did not love it. PPS x

    4. Hi Tonguengroove, That was tense and exciting as J.J. kidnapped Tina and then almost killed Bette. Walter was desperate when he caught up with Bette. They arrived just in time to stop a real tragedy occurring. Then Bette’s injury made both women re-assess their lives and relationship. Hopefully this has brought them even closer together. I can’t wait to read more as their reuniting was sexy and sweaty. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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