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    Temper, Temper Chapter 9

    Story written on May 17, 2011 by tonguengroove.
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    Porter to the rescue

    “No J.J. no, I’m not going anywhere with you. I’m with Bette now not you. I came here to get away, to forget about you, to move on with my life. Let me go J.J. you are sick, you need help and kidnapping me is not the way to go.”

    J.J. looked shocked – “Kidnapped; my darling you’ve got it wrong, you’re here for your own safety just so that I can get rid of that Porter woman so she won’t cause us any trouble.”

    “J.J, you’re not listening I AM NOT GOING ANYWHERE WITH YOU!”

    J.J.’s expression changed, anger distorting her features – “Well honey that completely changes my plans, if you’re not going with me Tina then you are not going anywhere.”

    With that J.J. took out her gun again and began to level it at Tina. Bette’s presence in the doorway had gone unnoticed as she quickly took stock of the situation. She threw herself towards Tina as hard as she could connecting with her and the chair knocking her sideways as J.J.’s shot rang out.

    Tina realised she was on her side on the floor still taped onto the chair and that Bette was laid partly across her. She heard footsteps running and shouts of “Police”, “Drop the weapon”, “Get down” and she also heard two more shots ring out. It was then that she realised that Bette hadn’t moved, she struggled to turn her head and saw Bette’s eyes were closed and blood was covering her face. Tina began to scream Bette’s name repeatedly as the police rounded the desk and found them on the floor.

    The next day
    Bette had opened her eyes to the bright lights of the emergency room and the sight of a tear stained Tina holding her hand. Her head was pounding and she felt a little nauseous but otherwise OK. J.J.’s bullet had caused a minor flesh wound at the side of Bette’s head but she had knocked herself unconscious as she hit the floor.

    Tina had suffered no injuries but was totally shocked by everything that had happened. She knew J.J. had issues but even Tina had not realised how badly messed up she was. When she had turned the gun on the police they had no choice other than to return fire. Tina had already answered all the questions the police had put to her as soon as she knew that Bette was safe, despite everything she felt sad about the outcome for J.J.

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    2. OMG… i was getting a little worried there and so glad the police got there fast and that JJ is no longer in the picture… a nice vacation is in order… love this story… keep it going… thanks

    3. Boy, JJ was some kinda crazy, totally and very seriously disturbed. If at all possible, the case against the other young woman that Tina had been on should be re-opened and all charges dropped because that could ruin her life forever.Now that the truth is known they should reverse that case without any problems. Now our girls get to have a care-free life with just your everyday problems. Hopefully. Great update. Thanks for posting.

    9. This chapter was so fast… Maybe you should have spread this over two or three chapters so things could be a little more detailed? I liked it, but I did not love it. PPS x

    13. Hi Tonguengroove, That was tense and exciting as J.J. kidnapped Tina and then almost killed Bette. Walter was desperate when he caught up with Bette. They arrived just in time to stop a real tragedy occurring. Then Bette’s injury made both women re-assess their lives and relationship. Hopefully this has brought them even closer together. I can’t wait to read more as their reuniting was sexy and sweaty. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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