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Tempting – Unleashed
We woke up the next morning. At first I did not know where I was or what happened, but I realised after a second with shock that I was naked and the person lying next to me was Alice. Alice not Dana, in Dana´s bed. Alice is still fast alseep, she looks so beautiful sleeping. I can´t help but touch her lips with my fingers. She smiles while I go softly over he lips and kisses my fingertip. “Morning” she mumbles still half asleep. I smile at her, just smile. Suddenly Alice sits up and cvoers her body with a blanket. “Was is wrong?” I ask. “No.” She says not even looking at me while getting dressed. “I ahve to go…do soem things…ahve to go…” sh racticlly runs away from em avoids to look at me. I let her leave, will talk to her later. Again I fall asleep in Dana´s bed, this time alone.
I wake up and look at the alarm. It says 11.45 am. I could not less care to get up. I am saying good bye to her. to Dana. Just saying silent goodbye. No more no less. After a while I get up. I have cried enough, said enough good bye. I need to talk to her. I grab a few things out of my bag take a quick shower and leave the apprtment. Where could alice be? At first I thought The Planet, but then I thought she would be home. It turns out I was right, she was home. I knock at her door and she opens it for me. Saying nothing I enter her appartment and sit down on her couch. “Alice,” I start my voice trembling “ I am sorry.” She looks at me for a moment inrritated. “You don´t have to be sorry it is all my mistake. I should not have taken advantage of you in such a situation. But it happened. We can´t take it back once doen is done.” She hugs me, and hold her in my arms. I start to cry with my head on her shoulder. We remain like this for a minute, when she suddenly kisses me like I did the night before. Before anything goes any further I break the kiss. “What´s wrong?” she asks. This time I am the one who runs away out of the appartment. Leaving her alone and confused.
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Brilliant start, I’m looking forward to reading more, I want to find out what’s wrong with Lara
Yay to fics on Lara and Alice, the couple whose story we never got to see…please keep up your fic, this is an intriguing start and I’m looking forward to reading more. I like how you weave what happened in S3 into your own take on things. PPS!
brilliant start and I love alice and lara stroys aswell can’t wait to see what happens please post soon again great start please carry on
thx for writing abt alice n lara. i always thk they r a gd match. nice start as well… pls update asap =]
I really loved reading this, and the title is perfect. You really capture their passion and their feelings of regret and betrayal towards Dana. When I read this I could picture Lara and Alice in my mind from how Season 4 ended.