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That One Moment: Chapter 4
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As she turned and met Bette’s eyes, Tina paused. The eyes which before had been filled with such confidence and warmth now displayed anticipation, but also a hint of fear. Tina had never seen such expressive eyes before. One glance and Tina felt as if she could instantly read the brunette’s mood. Though her better judgment told her to leave, her body would not budge. And eventually she relented, turning back to face Bette as she mumbled, “What the hell am I doing?” Bette let go of Tina’s wrist and smiled with relief. Sensing that Tina was relaxing, she turned on the famed Porter charm, giving her best killer smile.
“Well, I don’t know what you’re planning on doing, but I am desperately hoping that you’ll stay and have a drink with me, because I will be devastated if you don’t stay.”
Though Tina had been planning on leaving, she couldn’t deny this woman’s charms. What is it about her? I don’t even know anything about her except her name. Is it her smile? That smile can seriously melt the ice caps or something. I really should go…but… She relented, “Okay, I’ll stay for a drink. But just one. I was planning on making it an early night, and I’ve already had a drink or two tonight.”
Bette smiled at Tina and extended her arm toward the bar, offering, “Lead the way.”
Tina simply nodded and headed to the bar. There were a couple of barstools open, so she sat at one. When the bartender approached she ordered a martini, dry. Before Bette had even sat down, Tina downed it and had just ordered another when she heard the smooth voice coming from her left. “Liquid courage? I’m hope I’m not scary.”
Tina spun around on the stool and met Bette’s eyes. Yes, this experience and these feelings were incredibly scary, but no, not the gorgeous brunette in front of her. The dazzling smile took away all of Tina’s doubts. “No, not scary.”
Bette exhaled the breath she had been holding momentarily. She didn’t know what to say to this creature in front of her. Bette found herself at a loss for words. “So…ummm…you…”
Tina smiled at Bette’s surprising awkwardness and decided to help the situation. “So, Bette, what do you do for a living?”
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This seems like a really interesting story..I’ll go back and read the previous chapters. You write very well
do not give up, you are doing well…
I’m loving this story, the chemistry between them is palpable. Please continue, pretty please!
I see nothing wrong with this except you might not finish it, Bette and Tina are so cute, please write more
please do.
woohoo! I got to read 4 chapters in a row, catching up with a story is a great thing, but the excitement subsides when you realize that you’re gonna have to wait for the next update ;) Your writing is great, please do continue, chemistry seems to be your thing…don’t know how you’re doing with the organic chemistry (hope it’s going well though) but I can say you’re doing fantastic with the Tibette chemistry! I love a tipsy Tina, and the thing with Bette having a halo cracked me up..lolSo please don’t be humble and continue. Normally I would write PPVS, but being a student myself I know how stressful things can get, so I’m generous – please post when you can! It would be a crime to leave this story unfinished.
its not crap, I like it keep going.
You definitely need to continue. I would like to see how Bette gets Tina home and where they go from here.
Intense and Awesome…so yes you must continue ;D
THIS STORY IS KINDA INTERESTING….NO NOT KINDA….BUT REALLY INTERESTING….SO YOU CAN CONTINUE YOUR STORY PLEASEEEEEE……
Great story! Please continue!!!
hey all caught up… and this is cute… i love seeing a drunk tina and bette there to rescue her… please continue.. and soon
this is a great story to stop now… so youre not getting off that easy… waited a month in anticipation for this chapter and youre thinking of stopping… please continue… even if you take your time with it…
Hey girl, put that organic chemistry aside and continue your fabulous Tibette chemistry for us. This is great. I’m really liking your Tina and Bette’s charming openness and flirtation. Thanks.
well, now that u’ve got me hooked u r not going to continue, get real, u must continue.
Be confident, it’s a good story and keep writing it!!
That is not even close to bad… your writing is wonderful and the story is even better. You have better get it out of you mind not to stop writing for I feel if you do… you will start a rebellion to hunt you down and make you continue writting. :)