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That One Moment: Chapter 4
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Bette looked down at Tina, concerned about how much she had drank. Though she was genuinely concerned about Tina’s state, she couldn’t help but react and feel electricity coursing through her veins with her hands on Tina’s hips. She briefly fantasized about being in this position in a different context, but stopped herself before getting out of hand. “Are you okay?”
Tina had just been staring up and Bette, “Ummm, yeah. I…I think so.”
“Do you think you can stand?”
Tina had been reveling in the feeling of Bette’s hands on her hips, but realized that she did need to get up, so she nodded hesitantly before putting her weight on one foot and then the other, then straightening up to stand on her own.
Not wanting to release Tina, Bette’s hold on Tina lingered for a few extra seconds as she made sure that Tina was steady. Once she was certain that Tina could stand, she reluctantly let go.
Tina smiled up at Bette, embarrassed by her stumbling, but also embarrassed by the fact that she had been unable to force her gaze to leave Bette’s during the entire ordeal. She began to speak, but didn’t quite know what to say. She felt so confused and embarrassed and half expected Bette to laugh at her, but instead Bette’s expression was one of warmth and caring.
“Hey, I think you’ve had an exciting enough night, why don’t we get you home?”
The word we was not lost on Tina, whose near tumble had sobered her up enough to take in more of the situation. She blushed before responding, “Yeah. Thanks. I think tonight’s had enough excitement to make up for a whole week.”
Bette smiled at Tina, who thought that Bette could probably provide enough excitement for a lifetime. Bette gave Tina a concerned look, worried about how drunk she had seemed a few moments ago.
“Look, I really don’t want you driving home, and it’d be a waste for you to get a cab. Why don’t I give you a ride?”
Surprised but definitely pleased by the offer, Tina paused, not wanting to inconvenience Bette. “Oh, I don’t know. I don’t want you to have to go out of your way to…”
“Well where do you live? I’m sure you couldn’t be that far.” Bette smiled, not willing to lose this opportunity.
“I’m on Broad…just a little past High Street…”
“Oh, that’s right on my way. That works out perfectly.”
Tina was secretly thrilled that Bette would be taking her home, but really didn’t want to trouble her. “Are you sure? I wouldn’t want to…”
“Nonsense. Don’t even worry. It’s no trouble at all.”
The fact that Tina was about 20 minutes out of the way for Bette didn’t matter. She would drive an extra 100 miles if it meant that her evening with the blonde wasn’t over.
[blargh…my writing is such crap…i may or may not continue…]
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This seems like a really interesting story..I’ll go back and read the previous chapters. You write very well
do not give up, you are doing well…
I’m loving this story, the chemistry between them is palpable. Please continue, pretty please!
I see nothing wrong with this except you might not finish it, Bette and Tina are so cute, please write more
please do.
woohoo! I got to read 4 chapters in a row, catching up with a story is a great thing, but the excitement subsides when you realize that you’re gonna have to wait for the next update ;) Your writing is great, please do continue, chemistry seems to be your thing…don’t know how you’re doing with the organic chemistry (hope it’s going well though) but I can say you’re doing fantastic with the Tibette chemistry! I love a tipsy Tina, and the thing with Bette having a halo cracked me up..lolSo please don’t be humble and continue. Normally I would write PPVS, but being a student myself I know how stressful things can get, so I’m generous – please post when you can! It would be a crime to leave this story unfinished.
its not crap, I like it keep going.
You definitely need to continue. I would like to see how Bette gets Tina home and where they go from here.
Intense and Awesome…so yes you must continue ;D
THIS STORY IS KINDA INTERESTING….NO NOT KINDA….BUT REALLY INTERESTING….SO YOU CAN CONTINUE YOUR STORY PLEASEEEEEE……
Great story! Please continue!!!
hey all caught up… and this is cute… i love seeing a drunk tina and bette there to rescue her… please continue.. and soon
this is a great story to stop now… so youre not getting off that easy… waited a month in anticipation for this chapter and youre thinking of stopping… please continue… even if you take your time with it…
Hey girl, put that organic chemistry aside and continue your fabulous Tibette chemistry for us. This is great. I’m really liking your Tina and Bette’s charming openness and flirtation. Thanks.
well, now that u’ve got me hooked u r not going to continue, get real, u must continue.
Be confident, it’s a good story and keep writing it!!
That is not even close to bad… your writing is wonderful and the story is even better. You have better get it out of you mind not to stop writing for I feel if you do… you will start a rebellion to hunt you down and make you continue writting. :)