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That One Moment: Chapter 4
Bette smiled, about to compliment Tina’s passion when Tina interjected one last thought.
“And besides…” she paused as she swallowed the last of her martini and then looked straight into Bette’s eyes, “there’s nothing wrong with a good love story.”
Bette’s breath caught when she heard Tina’s statement. Tina was straight. Or so she said. Would it be reading too far into things to interpret that last comment? Bette looked up to Tina, but the blonde had looked away and was working on yet another drink.
Tina blushed as she couldn’t believe the words that had come out of her mouth. Oh my god. Did I just say that? What is going on? I’m flirting with her. Oh my god, I’m flirting with her. Shit, shit, shit. What is it about her? I’m supposed to be straight! Not supposed to be…I am straight! So what am I doing? Damn it! Stop it! She looked at Bette, who was watching her with a curious expression, and blushed. The entire encounter was running through her mind, and making her feel warm. She had probably had a little too much to drink, but she didn’t think she could stand Bette without the alcohol, so, averting her eyes, she caught the bartender’s attention and nodded at him to signal for another drink.
Bette was still stunned from Tina’s comment, but began to think that Tina had had quite a few drinks since they had been talking. “Ummm, Tina…don’t you think you’ve had enough to drink?”
Tina looked at Bette and laughed. “Noooo…” she said, though she realized full well that she had probably passed her limit two martinis ago, and that whether it was the blood rushing to her head from embarrassment, or just enough time for the alcohol to reach her bloodstream, her drinks were rapidly catching up to her. Bette didn’t believe Tina, especially with the way the word “no” dragged on for over five seconds.
When the bartender brought the next martini over, Bette smiled at him politely but said, “I’m sorry but I don’t think we’ll be needing that.”
Tina was momentarily indignant at Bette’s actions. “Hey! I wanted that!” As she defiantly stood up, she lost her balance, tumbling toward the ground. She automatically winced as she anticipated the impact of the cold tile against her head, but it never came. Instead, she felt two hands around her, one firmly on either hip, holding her up. She looked up to see Bette above her, holding her up. From Tina’s position, and with a conveniently placed light behind Bette’s head, a glowing shimmer made Bette look like an angel. Tina couldn’t help but stare at the glorious woman who had saved her. She was the most attractive and beautiful individual, not just woman but any individual, she had ever seen.
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(39 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
This seems like a really interesting story..I’ll go back and read the previous chapters. You write very well
do not give up, you are doing well…
I’m loving this story, the chemistry between them is palpable. Please continue, pretty please!
I see nothing wrong with this except you might not finish it, Bette and Tina are so cute, please write more
please do.
woohoo! I got to read 4 chapters in a row, catching up with a story is a great thing, but the excitement subsides when you realize that you’re gonna have to wait for the next update ;) Your writing is great, please do continue, chemistry seems to be your thing…don’t know how you’re doing with the organic chemistry (hope it’s going well though) but I can say you’re doing fantastic with the Tibette chemistry! I love a tipsy Tina, and the thing with Bette having a halo cracked me up..lolSo please don’t be humble and continue. Normally I would write PPVS, but being a student myself I know how stressful things can get, so I’m generous – please post when you can! It would be a crime to leave this story unfinished.
its not crap, I like it keep going.
You definitely need to continue. I would like to see how Bette gets Tina home and where they go from here.
Intense and Awesome…so yes you must continue ;D
THIS STORY IS KINDA INTERESTING….NO NOT KINDA….BUT REALLY INTERESTING….SO YOU CAN CONTINUE YOUR STORY PLEASEEEEEE……
Great story! Please continue!!!
hey all caught up… and this is cute… i love seeing a drunk tina and bette there to rescue her… please continue.. and soon
this is a great story to stop now… so youre not getting off that easy… waited a month in anticipation for this chapter and youre thinking of stopping… please continue… even if you take your time with it…
Hey girl, put that organic chemistry aside and continue your fabulous Tibette chemistry for us. This is great. I’m really liking your Tina and Bette’s charming openness and flirtation. Thanks.
well, now that u’ve got me hooked u r not going to continue, get real, u must continue.
Be confident, it’s a good story and keep writing it!!
That is not even close to bad… your writing is wonderful and the story is even better. You have better get it out of you mind not to stop writing for I feel if you do… you will start a rebellion to hunt you down and make you continue writting. :)