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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 4)
The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 4)
PART 2: MAUI
Chapter 4
Of course, it did not take us long to find a beach with a palm tree on it. Bette parked the Jeep at Paia Bay and we got out to strip down to our tank tops and shorts, as per the layer plan. We even brought sandals to replace our more rugged Adidas shoes.
I grabbed my comforter from the back of the Jeep and carried it down to the beach, spread it out over the sand in a nice shady spot and we both laid down.
There were other people, scattered here and there. Some seeking shade like us; others catching the rays; while still others were swimming.
Bette stretched out on her tummy, with her head facing me and her hands reaching above her shoulders. I was on my back with my hands at my sides. I looked up at the fronds of the palm tree, blowing languidly in the warm breeze. We could hear the sound of the waves breaking on the shore. It was tranquil and allowed us to slowly come down from those mountain adventures to a more restive place.
I was also aware of music wafting through the air, apparently from someone’s boom box . We could hear Seal’s troubled voice singing, “…my power, my pleasure, my pain….”
I turned my head toward Bette. She looked so beautiful laying there with her eyes closed, her lips slightly parted, her incredible hair somewhat tangled with tiny curls fluffed up at the side of her face and down around her neck. I longed to snuggle up to her, remembering that distant past when it was second nature for me to do so, when we belonged to each other.
Instead, I asked her, “Do you like it here? Being on Maui?”
“Mmm-mmm.”
“Are you having fun?”
“Yes.”
“Me too.” I hesitated, then stretched it out. “I’m so glad we have this time together. It means a lot to me.”
Bette opened her eyes and looked into mine. “That’s very sweet,“ she said.
Seal was now singing, “Waiting For You.”
“Do you hear that song?” I asked her
“Mmmmm, “ she murmured in reply.
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Great as ever! I can’t wait for the first kiss. I saw maui yesterday on tv it looks like a cool place.
September, If you’ve ever been in Florida, that compares somewhat, in some places to Maui. California doesn’t get the same rain to compare it to that.Thanks for your nice post.
Since I’m familiar w/all your stories, it’s been very nice to go back and take my time and savor the story. It’s better the second time around just like Bette and Sissee’s love for one another. Bette just doesn’t fully realize it as yet. I love this chapter b/c you captured the ambience of Maui and the languid nature of the setting. I wish I was there right now!
Thank you Azmama, for that glowing tribute. It’s nice to know my stories are worthy of your reading them twice and coming from your learned-self, that is high praise indeed! I guess I can wish right along with you about being in Maui right now. Let’s go to Mama’s Fishhouse and I’ll buy you a mai tai.
Phew, Sissee, once again you prove to me that you are an excellent writer. I especially like your descriptions of B & S when they were enjoying their surrounding nature while lying on the beach (under the palm tree, all those natural sounds, waves, a bird singing), you even mingle those with songs from the boom box, very realistic indeed. I am still waiting for Sissee (or Bette) to make the first move to express her love to the other! :-) Great story my friend!
What a treat! I come home for lunch & find you’ve posted. Sissee is soooo ready to get things going with Bette. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Have a great 4th of July weekend!
Bette’s Babe, Thank you for your kind words. I may not have a lot of readers but I sure appreciate the ones I do have. I am afraid that first move you talked about is a few chapters away but I hope you will find it worth waiting for.
kbergin47, Thanks for your post. It’s getting very obvious isn’t it. You have a great 4th too.