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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 27
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Previously on the beginning of a friendship:
Tina:
‘Auwnty Tinaa, Ai luf youa!’
‘I love you too, princess… Don’t forget that!’
My mother took her out of my arms and I felt my heart break for the second time in less than an hour. My mother kissed my cheek and walked out…
Of the room…
Of the house…
Of my life?
I collapsed on the bed. Embracing the pillow that her little head had been sleeping on, my sobs started to deepen and became uncontrolable.
I heard them leave…
Doors slammed…
Cars started…
But above every other sound I heard her heartbreaking cry for me:
‘Auwnty Tinaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’
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chapter 27
Bette:
When Alice arrived at my place the pain in my knee had become worst to the point I could hardly get up to let her in… She laughed as she saw me limping but then caught the look in my eyes.
‘Ok… Porter… What have you done this time eh?’
As I told her my herostory her smile became brighter.
‘That mother was one crazy bitch… You should hunt her down Porter, being the hero that you are’
She laughed again but she stopped when I stated:
‘I already have’
‘You’re kidding, Porter… You found the mother? With that?’
She pointed at my outstretched leg.
‘I went to Tinas yesterday for dinner… Guess who her sister is?’
‘Whoahoa, Porter… First of all… You went to dinner with THAT?’
Again the pointing finger
‘Second of all… That freaking bitch is Tinas sister?’
‘Listen Al? Its really a long story… I could tell you on the way to the doctors if you want to take me? I hate to ask but I’m in no position to drive and my car is still at Tina’s’
She laughed out loud again
‘Bette Porter… Freakin’ hero… Come on, lets go’
She helped me up and I leaned on her on my way to her blue mini.
Tina:
I just sat there, thinking about al the things that had happened in such a short period of time…
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You’re right, I have been waiting for this moment. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Hey…Home after a hard days work, the time is 11pm here in sweden and your great post really lighten up the day, but I had to agree with all the others…you can not stop there…please post soon
I was very happy when I saw that you posted and was even happier when I read the chapter until you ended like you did. You are being such a tease. Please post ASAP–can’t wait to see what happens when Tina gets to Bette’s house. Will they finally reveal their feelings for each other? Oh by the way in case I haven’t mentioned it I love your story.
what? why you stop here? you enjoy so much make us suffer don’t you? this is a good good good chapter :) This Eric is a bad gay how he dare to raise his hand to Tina? I hope Bette get better soon. Please make Tina go to Bette house! this would be the time to be together. Yea i know i am in the other part of the world and now you know why my english is bad. Congrats for had passed your test! take care
not nice to leave us like this lol. Ok now let Tina go to Bette and let Bette take care of her or she take care of Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!
i hope bette will be happy to see tina…can we get a kiss now?
Oh Bette, is right. Poor Bette having the doctor cut into an already messed up knee. Thank God for Alice. She is such as good friend and was there for Bette when she needed her. Tina having to face an angry and drug hyped Eric. Having these two stories parallel to one another. One trying to put her life back into some order after coming face to face of the wicked mother and one finally coming to terms of not loving someone that she has been with for years. If only these two knew that they were headed in the same direction. Now if only little Rosy and Steve could show up later and make a happy get together. Love the story so please post soon. And I feel the same way, an old friend (I could always use a friend).
Congrats on ur theory driving test ;) oh gosh… erm… did u just ‘commented’ on my story in ur story? hahaha I think u’re the one who has a way with words ;) Why do I have this feeling that Tina’s hand will just somehow ‘accidentally’ steer to the other side although she’s with the ‘Oh Bette’ brain?
Oh come on, you can’t stop right here! Give us more asap! Thanks for this great story.
Oh Bette? NO.. no no no justloveB+T no no..no. hurry up get tina to bette’ house now, urgh! you can’t stop here.. more.
Hey, zo mag je niet stoppen hé. Ga als de bliksem aan het werk en stuur vandaag nog een hoofdstukje door. Alvast bedankt op voorhand. En….proficiat voor je goeie theorie-examen.
NOOooooOOooo, you can’t just stop right there! Oh man, you are a cliffhanger!!! lol… Tina, just go to claim your women. JusrloveB+T, I need more fix today, I mean it.. NOW! lol
Did you forget the rest of the chapter? O.o So Eric is havin’ roid rage huh? No wonder he went from being a total wuss to a monster just like that. The mental image of draining Bette’s knee definitely didn’t help while I was eating my cinnamon roll. lol =p
TEASER!!!!!!!!!! so T is gonna be maybe movin in with Bette eh????/ hmm interesting things can happen….hehehehehheehehe!!!!
So Tina is going home. Bette better claim her woman,but first they will be putting up with Eric for awhile, she will regret what he just did and try to get Tina back. thanks
Get back to writing…PLS. you can’t leave us there pls!!! That eric is one sick puppy….
I can’t beleave you stopped there. Thanks for the great story.
hey justlove you cant leave it there with oh bette dont let us wait to long for your next post
on my death bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
T-E-A-S-E-R…LOL.POST SOON