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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 17

    “I’m
    not sure that’s a good idea.”

    Bette
    wasn’t sure what surprised her more: the words or who had spoken them. She
    looked over to the bartender, who was busy at the tap refilling her glass. She then turned to look at the person
    standing behind her. “I don’t suppose
    you’d like to have a seat.”

    “Normally
    I’d say no, but I’ll make an exception,” came the quiet response. “This time.”

    By
    now the bartender had made his way over and eyed the newcomer with interest. “And
    what can I get you to drink?”

    “Nothing
    right now, thank you.”

    The
    bartender shook his head. “You can’t let your friend drink all by herself.” He
    paused. “Tell you whatthe first one’s on me.”

    “My
    friend
    seems to be doing quite well without me. But I’ll take a club soda if
    you don’t mind.” Appeased by her change of heart, the bartender hurried off
    before she could change her mind.

    Bette
    sighed. “What are you doing here, Kit.?”

    Kit
    glanced at her sister, before settling her gaze on the tall glass of beer. “I
    could ask you the same thing.”

    “I
    needed to relax”, came the flippant response.

    “And
    this
    is the method you choose?” Kit
    grabbed the drink as Bette reached for it.
    “What the hell do you think you’re doing?”

    “I
    told you, I”

    Kit
    raised her hand to forestall Bette’s explanation. “I heard what you said.” She shook her head “Baby girl, are you out of
    your fucking mind?”

    “Kit,
    I really don’t think”

    “That’s
    the problem Betteyou’re clearly not thinking.
    I mean, if you were, this would be the last place on Earth you’d come to. For
    fuck’s sake Bette, you’re si”

    “Don’t
    say it,” Bette warned.

    The
    bartender made his way back and placed the club soda in front of Kit. He eyed
    the glass of beer sitting along side of her in confusion, seemingly unaware of the mounting
    tension between the two women. He picked
    up the beer and started to slide it back over to Bette when Kit reached out and
    stopped him.

    “She’s
    had enough,” Kit said by way of explanation.

    “Fuck
    you,” Bette shot back. She grabbed her
    jacket from the stool beside her and stormed out of the bar.

    Kit
    sighed and reached into her purse, pulling out a twenty dollar bill. She handed
    it to the perplexed bartender. “Sorry about that. Hope that covers it.” She then grabbed an item off the bar and made
    her way outside. She found Bette leaning
    against her car, digging through her pocketbook.

    “Shit.”

    “Looking
    for these,” Kit asked, holding up Bette’s forgotten car keys. “You left them
    inside.”

    Bette
    shook her head, knowing full well that Kit wouldn’t just hand them over without
    an explanation. “What do you want, Kit?”

    “I
    want to know a lot of things, Bette.”
    Kit walked up to Bette’s car and unlocked the passenger side door and
    climbed in. She unlocked Bette’s door
    and patiently waited. Surrendering to
    the futility if the situation, Bette opened her door and prepared herself for
    what she knew was going to be a long talk.

    In
    a very tight space.

    Just
    how Kit liked it.

    “Damn.”









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