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The Burden of Control – Chapter 3
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Previously
Kit: Have youhave you
talked to Tina about any of this?
Bette stops pacing. For a moment Kit thinks that shes going
to once again retreat to her bedroom. Instead Bette took a seat at the table
and rested her head against her hands.
Bette: I cant.
Kit: Why not? You two
were doing so well.
Bette: She hates me.
She must ***** hate me. I mean I thoughtthought there was still something
left between us. When she was therestaying over the house. Things seemed like
they were going so well.(pauses) I was wrong.
Kit: Why, Bette?
Bette: Because.
Because if there was, she would have told me.
Kit: Told you? Told
you what?
Bette: She would have
told me that she was pregnant.
Tina pregnant?
That had come as a complete surprise. The few times Kit had
seen Tina at The Planet she did notice that Tina seemed somewhat bigger. She
had just chalked it up to stress and overeating. Isnt that the normal response mechanism for
most people? Eat away the pain? Actually Bette seemed to do just the opposite
these days. But she never expected that
Tina was pregnant. That left a whole new set of questions that needed to be
answered. Most importantly was when she got pregnant. Bette obviously didnt
know about it. She would have said
something if she had. Did Tina do it
because of the affair? Or did she get pregnant before that and just not tell
Bette? And if she did, why would she keep it a secret? As if things werent
complicated beforethis was turning out to be one giant disaster. Bette had retired to her room without another
word after divulging her secret, leaving Kit to wonder what the ***** was going
on.
Bette didnt mention the previous nights drunken confession
the next morning. In fact she acted as if it never happened. But Kit wasnt
about to let the drinking aspect go without incident. They argued for quite a
bit when Bette arrived home that night.
Kit insisted that she get help for her drinking while Bette patently
denied that she had a problem to begin with. Kit suggested moving in temporarily
with Bette. Bette replied that she didnt need a babysitting or a sponsor. Kit just worried that being in a house alone,
with no one to talk to, led Bette to turn to alcohol for comfort. While Bette
saw Kits point, she wasnt about to admit that she was rather lonely in the
house by herself. Instead of inconveniencing Kit by having her come to stay at
the house, Bette finally agreed to move back in with Kit. Temporarily of
course.
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hey girl I think you should drop your cliffy rule to 24 hrs LOL
Well I for sure know what stress can do to the body so maybe Bette can get over it.
I love how you have Kit in this story, she needs to be used more often. Can’t wait for the next update.
This is a very good story so far.
Well, I hope it’s nothing too serious for Bette even though it’s been rough for her after the affair. Great update!
i have just one request..please do not make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love Kit she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plays with her all the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
i have just one request..please no make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love it she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plys with her al the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
K
Great chapter. Really hope nothing serious is wrong with B. Can’t wait for more.
Whether Bette is sick, or not, your writing is excellent, which pulls me in and always makes me anxious to read more.
Hi Tibette.I really love this story.i love everything that’s Tina and Bette.It is amazing that you have only written 3 chapters and yet I am deeply involve in this story.Please post soon. I would like to see Alice and Dani together.
Hope Bette ok. Helena is a bitch!