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The Burden of Control – Chapter 3
Bette: Kit
Kit: Just kidding.
(pauses) Ok, well you better get in there.
want me to go in with you?
Bette: No, its
ok. You said you have sandwiches? There
are some picnic benches over there. Why dont you take the food over and we can
eat when I get out? I shouldnt be too long. Im starved. I havent had a damn
thing to eat all day.
Kit: I figured.
Bette exited the car and disappeared into the building while
Kit gathered their lunch and started to spread it out on one of the metal
benches adjacent to the entrance. Sure
enough Bette came out less than 15 minutes later sporting a Band Aid on the
inside of her left arm.
Bette: That looks
good.
Kit: Lara made it from the remnants of last nights dinner special. What did
the doctor have to say?
Bette: Well he said it
could be a million things. Anything from a resilient strain of bacteria to
something completely different from what the other doctor thought. There wasnt
much he could say one way or the other without running some blood work first. I told him that I was under some stress
recently and he said that could have contributed to my tiredness. Of course he
thinks I should rest up and relax because my blood pressure was somewhat on the
high end
Kit: Bette thats not
something you want to mess around with.
Bette: I know, I know.
I told him Id try to take it easier this weekend.
Kit: But you wont.
Bette: I told him that
Id try. No promises.
Kit: Remember what I
said about the handcuffs
Bette: Do you even own
handcuffsyou know, dont answer that. I dont want to know why you would have
them in the first place. (pauses) So he said that hed call me either tomorrow
or Friday when the results came in to schedule a consultation. Are you happy
that I went?
Kit: Yes. Thank
you. You should listen to me more often.
Bette: Yeah, yeah. (pauses)
Time to eat. I do actually have to back to work at some point.
me up that has to be completed by tomorrow. Looks like Ill be bringing work
home tonight.
Kit: You have to rest
up.
Bette: Like I said
before Kit. This Weekend. Ill rest this weekend.
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A muted thump against her foot startled Kit from her
thoughts. She glanced down, and realized that she had dropped her novel.
Looking over at the clock hanging on the wall, she was surprised at how late it
was. She had been daydreaming for quite
a while now. Bette had been in with the doctor over forty minutes. What could be taking so long, she wondered?
Giving the doorway Bette disappeared into a long look, Kit resumed bending the
covers of what was rapidly becoming a dilapidated piece of unread literature.
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(51 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
hey girl I think you should drop your cliffy rule to 24 hrs LOL
Well I for sure know what stress can do to the body so maybe Bette can get over it.
I love how you have Kit in this story, she needs to be used more often. Can’t wait for the next update.
This is a very good story so far.
Well, I hope it’s nothing too serious for Bette even though it’s been rough for her after the affair. Great update!
i have just one request..please do not make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love Kit she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plays with her all the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
i have just one request..please no make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love it she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plys with her al the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
K
Great chapter. Really hope nothing serious is wrong with B. Can’t wait for more.
Whether Bette is sick, or not, your writing is excellent, which pulls me in and always makes me anxious to read more.
Hi Tibette.I really love this story.i love everything that’s Tina and Bette.It is amazing that you have only written 3 chapters and yet I am deeply involve in this story.Please post soon. I would like to see Alice and Dani together.
Hope Bette ok. Helena is a bitch!