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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 4

    Story written on July 12, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Kit frowned. Lately her sister just didnt seem like herself. Shed more than understand if Bette acted  lonely and depressed. Tina was the love of her life.  At times they seemed like polar opposites, but maybe thats why they fit so well together. They complimented one another. In losing Tina, Bette lost a part of herself. As far as she knew, Bette hadnt spoken to Tina in weeks now.  She had had high hopes of being able to work through their problems together.  But after Tina had hired a lawyer, the finality of the situation hit Bette. Kit didnt know what happened to make Tina reconsider such a formal resolution, but she knew the proceeding has left its mark on her sister.  After that Bette seemed so.defeated.  When Helena came into Tinas life, as well as Bettes, she did nothing to stop it. Not that she really could have at that pointbut she just stood aside and let it happen.

     

    Bette practically gave up on Tina and trying to mend things. And that wasnt Bette Porters stylenot at all. Was Helena a form of self punishment for the affair? Bette always found a way to get what she wanted. Was guilt keeping her from trying to get her life back in order? Kit sighed. She and Bette were going to have a long talk at dinner tonight.

     

    Kit was about to go back into the waiting room, when Bette emerges carrying Kits book.

     

    Kit: Baby girl, howd it go? I was getting worriedyou were in there so long.

     

    Bette: OK, Kit. Everythings ok. Lets go.

     

    Kit: What did the doctor have to say?

     

    They walk towards the exit

     

    Bette: Lets just go, ok?

     

    Kit: What about lunchI owe you lunch.

     

    Bette: Not today Kit. (distractedly)I havehave to get back to work.

     

    Kit: Isis something wrong?

     

    Bette turns to her sister, and takes her gently yet firmly by the arms and stops her.

     

    Bette (pleadingly) Kit, please! (frustrated) I have the WORST, ***** headache. Just please drop this. Therestheres nothing wrong. (pauses) I just want to get back to work.

     

    Kit: OK, Bette. Okay. Im just worried about you.

     

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    6. you and cliffhangers…so Bette told Melvin off. I wouldhave loved to see that on the show during the 1st season. So I guess there’s more to Bette’s health than stress. Don’t make her too sick, but if you do, then let Tina provide TLC.
      Glad to hear ‘classic Bette’ is coming back. Helena’s gonna get it!

    7. please tell me Bette dosent have leukemia??? Geezz i cant take one more cancer in that womans life please let it be just stress and when Tina come back home she will be fine..simple huh?..lol..great chapter pleaseee post sooonn

    10. Nooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!!!
      plsssss plssssssssss don’t let anything bad happen to Bette , plsssss for the Grace of God !!!
      post real sooooooon plsssssss . I am hanging in here just as I would if my life depended on this . Ohh Godd !!!
      *ok breathe.. Take a deep Breathe*

      u r writing an amazing story :) . I Love it :D but plss no harm to either Bette or(&) Tina . Plsssss it would break my heart . cuz I Love them .
      keep up the gr8 work and pls post real soonnnn .
      okay my guess about the pic in Bette’s desk drawer would be : It is B&TEE ‘s picture right :D . I hope I am right :D
      Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyyy !!!

    13. White blood cells…could be an immunologist Bette was referred to. I am thinking an autoimmune disease might be the culprit here. Hmmmmmmm…I really enjoy your writing. Please don’t keep us waiting to long.

    15. oh God! Please don’t let Bette be sick. Please bring on a long story because I love your writing, Your story is my favorite, and your writing style is superb.

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