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The Burden of Control – Chapter 4
James: But I thought that youd want some help sorting the invoicesI dont want you to fall behind schedule because I abandoned you.
Bette: James, youre not abandoning me. Im telling you to leave. Ill do fine here by myself. There are more important things than work. I want you to go and be there for Scott and his Mom.
James: If youre sureI really appreciate this. (pauses) Ill see you bright and early tomorrow morning.
Bette: Goodnight James.
James: Night Boss.
He leaves, closing the door behind him. Bette turns back to the papers littering her desk. She starts to make notes in the margins, adding her own input to Leos ideas. However, her concentration wanes after only a few minutes. Sighing she places her pen on the desk and leans back in her chair, tipping her head back against the cushion and closing her eyes. Her thoughts had a bad habit of occupying her mind at the most inappropriate times and she cant help but to think back to consultation she had earlier that day.
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The receptionist leads Bette down the hall to Dr. Stewards office and gestures her inside. Dr. Steward is sitting at his desk thumbing through some files. He runs a blunt, weathered hand though his gray, receding hairline and pinches the bridge of his nose tiredly, before placing excessively thick rimmed glasses on his brow. He looks up as she enters
Dr. Steward: Ms. Porter, please have a seat. (she sits). I have the results of your blood work. I just have a few questions to go through first.
Bette: Please, call me Bette.
Dr. Steward: Ok, Bette. Just to go over some backgroundwhen was you last gynecological exam?
Bette: About six months ago.
Dr. Steward: And did they take a pap smear and do a mammogram?
Bette: Yes. Everything came back normal.
Dr. Steward: Good. Thats good. (pauses, as he reads a page on his desk) Ok. Have there been any significant changes in you life? A change of employment or a move, perhaps?
Say in the past year or so. Anything that would cause undo stress?
Bette: (laughs) You could say that. My jobwell lets just say its a high maintenance position. But Ive been doing it for yearsits something that Im become accustomed to. Right now were a little more hectic than normal, but its nothing that I havent been able to handle. (pauses) I have beenwell Im currently going through a separation. My partner and I were together for seven years.
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Post soon. This is a great story, I can’t wait to find out what’s really wrong with Bette. Keep it up!
oh I know what’s going on I knew 3yrs of vet school would come in handy one of these days. Hee hee, good job on the explaination of the cells.
I just got caught up on your story…Its great by the way..Please post soon!
Sounds like leukemia to me. I hope not.
This is a nail-biter! Please continue soon…
Yup, techgal is right. Bette will be seeing a hematologist for a bone marrow aspiration. NOT FUN at all.
you and cliffhangers…so Bette told Melvin off. I wouldhave loved to see that on the show during the 1st season. So I guess there’s more to Bette’s health than stress. Don’t make her too sick, but if you do, then let Tina provide TLC.
Glad to hear ‘classic Bette’ is coming back. Helena’s gonna get it!
please tell me Bette dosent have leukemia??? Geezz i cant take one more cancer in that womans life please let it be just stress and when Tina come back home she will be fine..simple huh?..lol..great chapter pleaseee post sooonn
PLEASE DON’T LEAVE US HANGING TO LONG…….WHAT’S WRONG? BY THE WAY GREAT JOB THANKS POST SOOOOOOON…………
“I’m going to recommend you to a specialist.”… Oh no…
Nooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!!!
plsssss plssssssssss don’t let anything bad happen to Bette , plsssss for the Grace of God !!!
post real sooooooon plsssssss . I am hanging in here just as I would if my life depended on this . Ohh Godd !!!
*ok breathe.. Take a deep Breathe*
u r writing an amazing story :) . I Love it :D but plss no harm to either Bette or(&) Tina . Plsssss it would break my heart . cuz I Love them .
keep up the gr8 work and pls post real soonnnn .
okay my guess about the pic in Bette’s desk drawer would be : It is B&TEE ‘s picture right :D . I hope I am right :D
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyyy !!!
don’t leave me hanging-post soon.
K
Damn it, you can’t stop there lol. Wonderful chapter. Can’t wait for more.
White blood cells…could be an immunologist Bette was referred to. I am thinking an autoimmune disease might be the culprit here. Hmmmmmmm…I really enjoy your writing. Please don’t keep us waiting to long.
No no no no no no, please post really really really soon, you can’t stop like that. What is wring with Bette. I have to know, please please pretty please :) 5 stars by the way ;)
oh God! Please don’t let Bette be sick. Please bring on a long story because I love your writing, Your story is my favorite, and your writing style is superb.
What…..What……..WHAT…….AAAAAggggghhhh!!!!
THIS IS SAD, BETTE SICK AND TINA NOT THERE WITH HER!