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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 7

     

    Kit crossed into the spare bedroom and opened the door. She
    laughed at the poorly made bed. There were things that Bette just could not do
    right.  Cooking and cleaning were at the
    very top of the list and Kit cringed as she thought about how Bette was doing
    at her house. She hadnt heard from her in the two days since she moved back
    in.  She was concerned, almost to the
    point of wanting to go there to check up on her, but decided to give Bette the
    space that she asked for.  Although she will be getting a phone call tonight.  Like it
    or not, Im going to be keeping an eye on her
    . Kit sighed. The last thing she needs is another slip up.  Kit started to tug on the corner of the
    comforter to smooth it out, but thinking better of it, decided to just strip
    the bed and change the sheets.  As she
    moved to pull the comforter completely off, a small piece of paper fell to the
    floor. Curious, Kit reached down and picked it up.  Squinting at the small type, Kit held the paper
    up to the light and read: Dr. Jennifer
    Harris, director of

     

    Kit looked at the strange word again. What the ***** does that mean? 
    She backtracked out of the room, bed sheets momentarily forgotten, and
    entered her own bedroom. She crossed over to the closet and rummaged through a
    stack of books on one of the shelves inside. 
    Pulling out a dictionary, she flipped through the pages until she found
    the word she was looking for.

     

    A medical specialist
    who deals in the diagnosis and treatment of

     

    Kit gasped as the let the book fall to the floor.

     

    Kit: Oh my God.

     

    ***********************************************************************

     

    Bette was getting nowhere with her note. I should be writing grant proposals or
    signing off on petty cash receipts, but here I am unable to write a damn word
    to Tina
    . She glanced at the clock. Twenty five minutes had gone by and she
    still hadnt been able to write anything meaningful down. I have a Masters Degree from Yale collecting dust on the wall over
    there and yet I cant bring myself to write a simple letter. I used to write
    letters to her all the time.  Granted we
    were happy and in love at that point. Its much easierso much easier to say I
    love you than Im sorry.  I just dont
    know what to write that wont sound clichd or trite.
    Bette sighed. She probably wont open it anyway.

    Comments

    1. Nice chapter. I guess we’ll just wait and see where you take us. I guess there could have been a mixup at the lab, right? It really does happen. Although, it is usually the NURSES who mix up the samples. I will run from the tomatoes now…..

    2. Ok with the way Bette and Tina’s conversation was going in the beginning I think I would drink too….LOL….Now Bette can go to this doctor and get more tests that will clear up this mistake….Post soon!

    3. Christy,
      Man, do I ever resent that statement! Nurses do not mix up samples….it is usually a lab screw up. Now that is out of the way…I am hoping that the doctor switched the sample with another patient. (Christy, now we are both off the hook.) Great chapter…Tina is pregnant and Bette might have cancer…great drama going on here.

    4. Cliff hangers I hate them post soon Tina is hurting bette to by not taking some of the responsiblity for some of the problems in their relationship. Tina needs to examine herself a little and not just place the blame on bette

    5. OK first off if you kill anyone off I will be ok with it!!! Yeah it really shocking and upseting but this is fan fic, so do what you want with YOUR story. The begining of B/T phone convo had me lmao, it was great. So cancer?? what type??
      OH and I love drama so bring it on!!!
      awesome update, can’t wait for the downhill ride. it’s the best part of the rollercoaster ride. lol

    6. Good chapter Tibette, and it was 5 pages long. Bette said that she “SHE MIGHT HAVE CANCER” I hope everything turn out fine for her. I hope Bette let Kit be there for her. And I hope Tina tell Bette she love her before she find out about the cancer.

    7. Great chapter…You got to have some DRAMA, but PLEASE at leaset let her go in to remission atleast.So they could live happily ever after….please post real soon..THANKS…..

    8. oh no please no more cancer for that poor woman…i just have one question is there any chance for B and T be happy again? please give me hope to believe..great chapter sad but great post soon thanks

    9. I’m glad they talked. All of them.
      Bette needs to come out of her haze and address her health. Perhaps the baby will motivate her. Is yours a story where she knows about the baby already and is just waiting for Tina to reveal it to her?
      Thanks for posting! And I like that you have extra pages!

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