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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 7

    Story written on July 19, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Author Notes:

    Bette makes a move, Kit makes a discovery, and we learn the truth.

     

    Maybe I should just go
    knock on her apartment door and see what happens. Oh yeahand have     Helena answer it and slam it back in my face. No thanks.

     

    What if I just called
    her? I mean whos to say she still has the same number    . Bette reached for
    the phone with only a little hesitation and dialed Tinas cell phone number. It
    started to ring. I mean people change
    their numbers all the time in situations like this. Theres no reason for me to
    think that she kept

     

    (There is a click as
    line is picked up)

     

    Tina: Hello?

     

    Bette opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came out.

     

    Tina: Hello? Is
    someone there?

     

    Bettes mind worked furiously to find something appropriate
    say.

     

    Anything that would keep Tina from hanging up.

     

    Anything that would allow her to listen to that voice just a
    while longer.

     

    Anything

     

    But the words just werent there and so Bette quickly but
    gently pressed on the receiver, ending the call.  She sat back and closed her eyes, a faint
    smile crossing her lips.  It had been
    weeks since she had spoken to Tina.since Tina had decided to move back home
    and into the spare bedroom. She remembered the dinner that they had shared and
    the light conversation they were able to have. It had felt so nice.

     

    She was startled from her thoughts by the buzzing of her
    intercom. Looking at the clock and over to the door, she pushed on the
    connection button.

     

    Bette: James, I thought I told you that I wasnt to be
    interrupted for an hour.

     

    James: Well I know Betteits just you have a phone call.
    And I thought that youd want to take this one.

     

    Bette: What makes you think that?

     

    James: (hesitantly) Well, because its Tina.

     

    Bette released the intercom button and stared at the
    blinking red light on her phone *****!
    What do I say? What the ***** do I say?     She slowly picked up the receiver
    and brought it to her ear. Taking a deep breath she pushed the button.

     

    Bette: Hello?

     

    Tina: Bette?

     

    Bette: Tina…Iuh…hi.

     

    Theres an uncomfortable pause.

     

    Bette: (awkwardly) What do you waI meanwhat can I do for
    you?

     

    She winced at her inability to speak her mind.

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    1. Nice chapter. I guess we’ll just wait and see where you take us. I guess there could have been a mixup at the lab, right? It really does happen. Although, it is usually the NURSES who mix up the samples. I will run from the tomatoes now…..

    2. Ok with the way Bette and Tina’s conversation was going in the beginning I think I would drink too….LOL….Now Bette can go to this doctor and get more tests that will clear up this mistake….Post soon!

    3. Christy,
      Man, do I ever resent that statement! Nurses do not mix up samples….it is usually a lab screw up. Now that is out of the way…I am hoping that the doctor switched the sample with another patient. (Christy, now we are both off the hook.) Great chapter…Tina is pregnant and Bette might have cancer…great drama going on here.

    4. Cliff hangers I hate them post soon Tina is hurting bette to by not taking some of the responsiblity for some of the problems in their relationship. Tina needs to examine herself a little and not just place the blame on bette

    6. OK first off if you kill anyone off I will be ok with it!!! Yeah it really shocking and upseting but this is fan fic, so do what you want with YOUR story. The begining of B/T phone convo had me lmao, it was great. So cancer?? what type??
      OH and I love drama so bring it on!!!
      awesome update, can’t wait for the downhill ride. it’s the best part of the rollercoaster ride. lol

    7. Good chapter Tibette, and it was 5 pages long. Bette said that she “SHE MIGHT HAVE CANCER” I hope everything turn out fine for her. I hope Bette let Kit be there for her. And I hope Tina tell Bette she love her before she find out about the cancer.

    8. Great chapter…You got to have some DRAMA, but PLEASE at leaset let her go in to remission atleast.So they could live happily ever after….please post real soon..THANKS…..

    9. oh no please no more cancer for that poor woman…i just have one question is there any chance for B and T be happy again? please give me hope to believe..great chapter sad but great post soon thanks

    10. I’m glad they talked. All of them.
      Bette needs to come out of her haze and address her health. Perhaps the baby will motivate her. Is yours a story where she knows about the baby already and is just waiting for Tina to reveal it to her?
      Thanks for posting! And I like that you have extra pages!

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