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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 7

    Story written on July 19, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Author Notes:

    Bette makes a move, Kit makes a discovery, and we learn the truth.

    Think of something to
    say. Anything. Say SOMETHING!

     

    Bette: (quickly) I miss you.

     

    Oh my ***** GOD, I
    didnt say that, did I?

     

    Tina: What?

     

    Bette: Uhnothing.

     

    Tina: No, Bette. You
    said something. What did you say?

     

    Bette: I saidI said(trails off)

     

    Tina: You said?

     

    Bette: I said I miss you.

     

    Tina: (very quietly)
    Oh.

     

    Bette: Im sorry. I shouldnt have said that. I just

     

    Tina: (interrupts) Bette?

     

    Bette: Yeah?

     

    Tina: I miss you too.

     

    Bette: (shocked) Youyou do?

     

    Tina: Sometimes I wake
    up and I dont remember whats happened and I look for youbut you arent
    there. (pauses) Then it all comes back to me.

     

    Bette: Oh. (pauses) Im sorry.

     

    Tina: I know you are.
    But thats not the problem.

     

    Bette: Its not?

     

    Tina: I know youre
    sorry. II believe that you are. I do. Its just thatit hurts, you know?

     

    Bette: I do.

     

    Tina: Do you?

     

    Every time I think
    about you and Helena.

     

    Bette: I

     

    Tina: (interrupts) I
    dont trust you anymore and I dont know how to get past that.

     

    Bette: Tina

     

    Tina: Bette, Im
    trying to be happy.

     

    Bette: I want you to be happy.

     

    Tina: Even if that
    means staying with     Helena?

     

    NO!!! Bette
    swallowed hard before answering. Stop itthis
    isnt about you anymore.

     

    Bette: (whispers) Even if, Tina. I(sincerely) I want whats
    best for you.

     

    Tina: And if that
    means staying away and letting me go. If my happiness depended on you walking
    out of my life for good, right now, would you do that?

     

    Bettes mind was reeling. It would kill me.

     

    Bette: Ifif thats what would make you happythen yes.

     

    Tina: Oh. (pauses for
    a long moment) Bette?

     

    Bette: Yeah?

     

    Tina: I dont want
    that. (sighs) Would youcan you give me some time to sort things out. I need to
    know if I could trust you again. Will you give me time?

     

    Bette: (relieved) Ill give you forever, Tina.

     

    Tina: and umabout Helenais she giving you any problems at work?

     

    Shes a *****
    monster, Tina    . She makes work a
    bigger ***** nightmare than it already is.     Bette thought. Can you please let her go crawl back into
    ***** where she belongs?

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    1. Nice chapter. I guess we’ll just wait and see where you take us. I guess there could have been a mixup at the lab, right? It really does happen. Although, it is usually the NURSES who mix up the samples. I will run from the tomatoes now…..

    2. Ok with the way Bette and Tina’s conversation was going in the beginning I think I would drink too….LOL….Now Bette can go to this doctor and get more tests that will clear up this mistake….Post soon!

    3. Christy,
      Man, do I ever resent that statement! Nurses do not mix up samples….it is usually a lab screw up. Now that is out of the way…I am hoping that the doctor switched the sample with another patient. (Christy, now we are both off the hook.) Great chapter…Tina is pregnant and Bette might have cancer…great drama going on here.

    4. Cliff hangers I hate them post soon Tina is hurting bette to by not taking some of the responsiblity for some of the problems in their relationship. Tina needs to examine herself a little and not just place the blame on bette

    6. OK first off if you kill anyone off I will be ok with it!!! Yeah it really shocking and upseting but this is fan fic, so do what you want with YOUR story. The begining of B/T phone convo had me lmao, it was great. So cancer?? what type??
      OH and I love drama so bring it on!!!
      awesome update, can’t wait for the downhill ride. it’s the best part of the rollercoaster ride. lol

    7. Good chapter Tibette, and it was 5 pages long. Bette said that she “SHE MIGHT HAVE CANCER” I hope everything turn out fine for her. I hope Bette let Kit be there for her. And I hope Tina tell Bette she love her before she find out about the cancer.

    8. Great chapter…You got to have some DRAMA, but PLEASE at leaset let her go in to remission atleast.So they could live happily ever after….please post real soon..THANKS…..

    9. oh no please no more cancer for that poor woman…i just have one question is there any chance for B and T be happy again? please give me hope to believe..great chapter sad but great post soon thanks

    10. I’m glad they talked. All of them.
      Bette needs to come out of her haze and address her health. Perhaps the baby will motivate her. Is yours a story where she knows about the baby already and is just waiting for Tina to reveal it to her?
      Thanks for posting! And I like that you have extra pages!

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