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    The Burning Wheel. 4

    Story written on August 23, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Make this come true, help me get through…into you….

     

     

     

    It’s not Saturday night anymore. Its dawns early light on a Sunday morning. And I am sitting on my roof. Not on the fire escape anymore. Drinking a bottle of something I swiped from Last Call. I am sitting there thinking about how utterly miserable I am. How fucking useless I feel. I am thinking that something was out there suffering in the void while I wasted my life here in paradise…..and then paradise appeared.

     

     

     

    Fucking smashing site of paradise. I felt all out of control. Like I needed to hit myself to snap out of the thing she was doing to me. Except she wasn’t really doing anything. She was just standing there looking at me with a deep sense of concentration. She walked over and her steps made the gravel on the roof crunch a little as she walked over millions of little pebbles.

     

     

     

    Now what I didn’t mention was that she dropped me off at home after that trip out to the “real world.” What I don’t mention till now is that she never really talked to me after that. What I should mention is that it was a year ago. Oh yeah we see each other but she avoided me like the red death. Try as I could she wouldn’t let me win her eyes on any occasion that I tried to meet. And as of lately she was throwing that fucking commando in my face every chance she got. It was driving me bananas. I came to the realization that I would not get what I wanted, no gift of her. And yes I was pissed and sore.

     

     

     

     

    There she was though. On that Sunday morning. After I left Last Call. After I played that file about love not being enough.  I was a full year older. I was a full year crazier, madder, bitter, lonely, and lost. Did she care? I was about to find out:

     

     

     

     

     

    “You’ve been going out…..and stealing things from the stores haven’t you?”

     

     

     

    “I have been making scheduled pick ups for Last Call….I have an escort and I followed all the rules.”

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    1. One whole year… That is a long time to wait, that also is a lot of determination. But I like that Carmen has morals and isn’t giving in easily. Seems like Tasha will be a tremendous amount of trouble. Great update, as always :) * * * * *

    2. Wow Tasha is a c*unt! It pisses me off that Carmen is with someone that treats her like a possession. “She is my piece of meat”…eeeww that’s so slimy and creepy. There’s definitely more to that relationship and I can’t wait to find out what it is…there is more right? As for Shane and Carmen it may have taken a year but at least Carmen finally admitted that she feels something. Great stuff once again. This one really has me thinking, perhaps too much…I really should be working right now. :-)

    3. It’s midnight where I’m at and I decided to check in before bed just in case and I’m happy that I did:)This chapter was soooo good. Love that Tasha is very possesive over Carmen, that Tasha knows that Carmen thinks and wants Shane, that whole dialogue between Tasha and Shane was marvelous!Just wow. As I said before the chemistry between Shane and Carmen is palpable. Their love chase is amazing,you’re amazing. Okay, stopping now!******

    5. I was without internet access for a couple of days so my comment is late. I’m still enjoying this story and I hope you continue with it. Love the update.

    6. Love young disobedient Shane and Old mature Carmen. and I like even Tasha. She can be a devil to make Shane and Carmen go together eventually. Thank you and post soon please.

    7. No tequila girl? Pshh. Stupid future. Heh. So, anyhoo, Tasha’s totally standing between Shane and Carmen and she knows it. . . revels in it. But even though Tasha’s an ass, I must admit that I like what she brings to the table with her open hostility and opposition to Shane. Awesome story. (Crazy, I had a dream last night. Something about nuclear winter and driving around, trying to find supplies to survive in a dying world, thanking my lucky stars that my Subi is all-wheel drive. Anyway, I’m pretty sure it was because of this story. Gotta love the apocalypse.) * * * * *

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