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The Burning Wheel.
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“Shane….what are you going to do now….you tested so high you could do anything………You could sign with the AC everyone knows they only take the smarties….you Shane are a smartie…”
“Shane’s not a smartie…she’s a hottie…..you are going to become one of the Pleasure Slaves aren’t you….I can see it…..you and all those girls……maybe I can find you one day…..what do you think Shane?”
“I think Dana…that you are drunk……and I am sorry….about…….”
“…..No….don’t be sorry Shane….you are never sorry….you took my toys, you pulled my hair……you took my virginity…….l know you my whole life…..and now you won’t be with me anymore…..”
“Hey…..whoa……you two where….”
“Yes Al…me and Shane…….since we where 15 right Shane?”
“Oh my god…..you guys are like sisters practically…..how could you?”
“Come Al you knew……how could you not know?”
“Well I thought…..but I certainly didn’t know anything….”
“Dana…..I told you that I will always have a place in here for you…….but….’
“But what Shane…..what!”
“I need something more Dana……I am sorry.”
“So…in your room at night….with your folks down the hall…..oh man….that is crazy….”
“Alice!”
“What Dana…..I’m just saying…your parents didn’t adopt Shane so you could have a fuck buddy…..”
“Al that’s not what happened.”
“Yeah Shane….go ahead and tell her how you much love me…..how there will never be anyone but you and me…right? Right?’
“I am going to move my stuff out and get a place in the Delta…..it’s close to the water……”
“Why are you doing this? Why are you telling me this now?”
“You bought it up Danes…..I was going to tell you in the morning…..I knew you wanted to have a good time tonight for old times sake…..you bought it up not me…..”
“So what are you going to do…you’re not going to school you’re not joining the service…..what are you going to for money….and food…you have to work in this society Shane…we all do…we can’t just get by with a good looks and our tans….we need to do something….”
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already a new fic ..cool! wow another out of this world AU. cool..so is lol carmen older than shane in this world??
LOL CARMEN IN A POLICE UNIFORM… LOL I COULD DEFENETLY IMAGEN THAT LOL VERY NICE START CANT WAIT FOR THE NEST UPDATE!!!!
I like this story. Man, you have a knack for laying it all out smooth and fast. As a reader I appreciate that …getting drawn into the flow of the story without it making my head hurt.
Hmmmmm verrry Interesting
That was verrrrrry interesting. Continue.
Hah, Tasha sounds like she could give the evil Sergeant in “Full Metal Jacket” a run for his money. Thank you for this new story :D
Very very good!!!!! Love it!!!!
Fantastic beginning. Love it! Can’t wait for more.
reminds me of Equilibrium…good movie good beginning to your story looking forward to more
This story looks like it will be a good one, but where’s Bette and will she meet up with Tina?
Carmen in uniform? Will that keep Shane in line? Can’t wait to see.
Wow everytime you finish a story and you leave me speechless, and I think there is no way you can top that. You go and write something better! How do you do it?!?! Well I love this new story! Love the NIN quote in the summary. The Great Destroyer great song! PPS! Oh yeah FIVE STARS *****!