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The Burning Wheel.
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“No…you need to do something…I need to get out of here…….”
“Shane…..that’s treason….you know you can’t say things like that….”
“Alice…..there is a world out there…don’t you ever think about? Don’t you remember…..what it was like before this?”
“Shane…..stop! Ok. I can’t hear this…..I am going home…..I am sorry about you guys…..”
“Yeah me too……”
I watched them walk away. I knew that they where right. My only chance in life was to be a love slave….it was the only line of work that I didn’t need a degree in. But I knew there was something more out there. I knew that there was something calling me. So as they walked away I climbed the fence knowing Alice would strip again when she passed the guards.
Like clockwork I heard the cat calls. The hoots. The light dropped on our vacant spot just as I ducked the corner. I couldn’t read the sign because it was dark and faded over with time. I could smell the ocean. I wasn’t scared. Things looked different in this level of darkness. Things looked alive to me. Cars flipped over and burned. Scorched buildings broken glass everywhere. My eyes burned a little. More from seeing things I had never seen before. Sounds everywhere of wind blowing, rattling against something unknown. It was everything I dreamed about.
There were no birds like in the Film Disc’s. There were no insects buzzing. It was as if all life was stopped. I made quick time. I knew that I was going to get caught. I could feel it. Three months in the stockade and 10 lashes. Probation and Full enlistment into the Blue Persuasion program. They only gave that injection out to the very old (though not many remained) or to those who rebelled and jumped the fence.
I keep moving out of fear that they would send the patrols. I get to the very southern edge of the city and I see the water. I see it for the first time up close. I can smell the salt. Smell the decay of the fish in the sea. It smells wonderful to me. I feel free, I feel the edge of my reason. I feel like taking my shoes off. I feel like walking on the sand. I feel like doing it and I do.
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already a new fic ..cool! wow another out of this world AU. cool..so is lol carmen older than shane in this world??
LOL CARMEN IN A POLICE UNIFORM… LOL I COULD DEFENETLY IMAGEN THAT LOL VERY NICE START CANT WAIT FOR THE NEST UPDATE!!!!
I like this story. Man, you have a knack for laying it all out smooth and fast. As a reader I appreciate that …getting drawn into the flow of the story without it making my head hurt.
Hmmmmm verrry Interesting
That was verrrrrry interesting. Continue.
Hah, Tasha sounds like she could give the evil Sergeant in “Full Metal Jacket” a run for his money. Thank you for this new story :D
Very very good!!!!! Love it!!!!
Fantastic beginning. Love it! Can’t wait for more.
reminds me of Equilibrium…good movie good beginning to your story looking forward to more
This story looks like it will be a good one, but where’s Bette and will she meet up with Tina?
Carmen in uniform? Will that keep Shane in line? Can’t wait to see.
Wow everytime you finish a story and you leave me speechless, and I think there is no way you can top that. You go and write something better! How do you do it?!?! Well I love this new story! Love the NIN quote in the summary. The Great Destroyer great song! PPS! Oh yeah FIVE STARS *****!