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The Chase – chapter 15
«Do you have her address ?»
Bette gave him the information he wanted and then stood up. «Well, if there’s nothing else, I have a plane to catch and my girlfriend is probably worried sick about me», she said, walking toward the door.
«You’re not going anywhere, Miss Porter. As a matter of fact, you and your friend will be detained until we clear this up», the detective told Bette who didn’t take the news rather well…
«Listen, I’m a law abiding citizen and I have done nothing wrong. I don’t know shit about a stolen painting and I’d like to get back home today»
The detective stood up and took her arm. «OK, that’s it, let’s go», he said opening the door for her.
«Where are you taking me now ?»
«We’re going to the Préfecture de police, which in plain English is the police station, where we can wait peacefully for our investigation to unfold». Bette had no choice but to obey him even though all she wanted to do was kick him in the shin and run away. She looked around for Tina and when she spotted her, she waved trying to get her attention.
«What are you doing?», the detective asked, clearly annoyed with Bette.
«I’m trying to get my girlfriend’s attention, do you mind?»
«If I say yes, will it make a difference to you?», he asked sarcastically.
But Bette wasn’t listening since Tina was now looking her way. She came running. «Babe, what’s going on ? Where are you going?», Tina asked.
«They’re taking me to the police station until we clear this mess up. Have you talked to someone at the embassy? What about our luggage?»
Tina was on the verge of tears. «It was a fucking answering machine so I left a message and yeah, I got our luggage back. The airline is keeping it for us»
«OK, time to go», the detective said.
«Can she come with us?», Bette asked him.
«No, she will have to take a cab»
«What ?», Bette shrieked. «Why can’t she come with us ?»
«Because she can’t. Those are the rules. Miss, just tell the driver to take you at 78, Bonaparte street», he informed Tina.
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(49 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Oh man didnt expect that M,,,,now what is going to happen can’t wait for the next chapter!! loved it
Cant trust everyone all the time. Poor Tina
WTF, poor B&T, hope peggy some where there see Bette and help her and Tina, and find that bitch that get Bette in trouble. Please post more, thanks!
Get the feeling Julie will be long gone. This was so not right. They had such a good time. Hopefully our Ms. Peggy Peabody is around somewhere.
“I don’t know shit about a stolen painting and I’d like to get back home today»” ….Be glad you’re not in Phoenix, Bette! Wow, I didn’t expect this turn of events! Well, Tina gets her wish to extend their stay in Paris. Thanks!
wow. love the twist. PPS:D
i’m with the rest… never expected that… tina should go back to that artist and kick her ass… PPS
OK did she switch the painting or what? I find it hard to believe Bette would not some collectors painting and how much it is worth. And as for the hookers the real Bette would have bitch slapped the first one that aproched and the others would have got the message. I’m going along for the ride so take us there.
Well that was a twist.
Wow!! Wasn’t expecting that to happen!!! Hope Bette gets out untouched! I’m on the edge of my seat, girl!!!
Wow! Didn’t see that coming…can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hi Milady, This is a fine chapter which has just blown open the last few chapters. I now have a visions of an all woman prison in mind ala Season 1. Girls on heat. Mmmm. I just hope that Tina can get to the bottom of things from the outside. Intriguing ad entertainment. More please from Your Loyal Fan.
Can’t believe Bette was taken like that, she is much more astute than tha, and being the business woman that she is, this turn of events is quite surprising. Really surprised she did not know of this theft, being a gallery owner and as widely known as she is and enjoying a level of respect throughout the world. Very interesting, and, of course, Julie will be the hell out of that flat with noone ever having heard of her. Bette had better watch out, the b–ch will be trying to rip off the Porter gallery. PPS
What a twist!
Wow what a turn, what i love the most about thses stories is that you can’t expect what is going to happen next. Thanks post soon Love
Poor B&T!!!! I can not wait to see what happens. But please let Bette be OK. Thanks PPVS
oh shit; is Bette that naive???????