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The Chase – chapter 15
«Baby, do what he says and I’ll see you in a little while OK?». Bette wanted to take her in her arms and comfort her, but she didn’t get a chance. «OK, let’s go!», the detective said impatiently. He took Bette to a police car and opened the door for her. At least, he hadn’t handcuffed her. He drove for about fifteen minutes before pulling into the parking lot of an old but beautiful building.
«How long do you think I’ll have to wait in here?», Bette wanted to know as he opened the car door.
«As long as it takes… After all, we’re only talking about a painting worth over two million dollars», was all he said. Bette stopped dead in her tracks. «Over two million bucks?». She was now realising the seriousness of the situation.
They walked into the building and the detective brought her in the back. Bette jumped when she saw the cell.
«You’re not putting me in there are you?», she asked, shocked.
«Well, I’m sorry but I don’t have a nice hotel room where you can go. Until we check your credentials and make sure you didn’t try to smuggle that painting out of the country with Miss Sinclair’s help, you’ll have to wait in here…». He unlocked the door and Bette glanced inside. Six women were all seated and staring at her. By the way they were dressed, it wasn’t hard to guess how they earned their living…
The detective pushed Bette inside and she shivered when she heard the key in the lock. Quickly, she was surrounded by three women who were looking at her with lust in their eyes.
«Bonjour, mon chou», one of them said, stroking her arm.
«I don’t speak French», Bette replied coldly.
«Mmm, I like English women very much… You are quite beautiful honey», one of them said, her eyes on her breasts. Bette tried to smile, but all she could do was winced in disgust. «Thank you, really», she told the woman while walking backward. Suddenly, she turned around and grabbed the bars with both hands.
«Get me out of here !», she shouted, but she felt like no one could hear her…
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(49 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Oh man didnt expect that M,,,,now what is going to happen can’t wait for the next chapter!! loved it
Cant trust everyone all the time. Poor Tina
WTF, poor B&T, hope peggy some where there see Bette and help her and Tina, and find that bitch that get Bette in trouble. Please post more, thanks!
Get the feeling Julie will be long gone. This was so not right. They had such a good time. Hopefully our Ms. Peggy Peabody is around somewhere.
“I don’t know shit about a stolen painting and I’d like to get back home today»” ….Be glad you’re not in Phoenix, Bette! Wow, I didn’t expect this turn of events! Well, Tina gets her wish to extend their stay in Paris. Thanks!
wow. love the twist. PPS:D
i’m with the rest… never expected that… tina should go back to that artist and kick her ass… PPS
OK did she switch the painting or what? I find it hard to believe Bette would not some collectors painting and how much it is worth. And as for the hookers the real Bette would have bitch slapped the first one that aproched and the others would have got the message. I’m going along for the ride so take us there.
Well that was a twist.
Wow!! Wasn’t expecting that to happen!!! Hope Bette gets out untouched! I’m on the edge of my seat, girl!!!
Wow! Didn’t see that coming…can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hi Milady, This is a fine chapter which has just blown open the last few chapters. I now have a visions of an all woman prison in mind ala Season 1. Girls on heat. Mmmm. I just hope that Tina can get to the bottom of things from the outside. Intriguing ad entertainment. More please from Your Loyal Fan.
Can’t believe Bette was taken like that, she is much more astute than tha, and being the business woman that she is, this turn of events is quite surprising. Really surprised she did not know of this theft, being a gallery owner and as widely known as she is and enjoying a level of respect throughout the world. Very interesting, and, of course, Julie will be the hell out of that flat with noone ever having heard of her. Bette had better watch out, the b–ch will be trying to rip off the Porter gallery. PPS
What a twist!
Wow what a turn, what i love the most about thses stories is that you can’t expect what is going to happen next. Thanks post soon Love
Poor B&T!!!! I can not wait to see what happens. But please let Bette be OK. Thanks PPVS
oh shit; is Bette that naive???????