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The Christmas Gift
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“Oh, that’s a great advice coming from a woman who needed to rent her family”
“Would you please just leave me alone now?”
“Sure! I’ll do even better than that!” the blonde approached the desk, placing her ‘wedding ring’ on it, “We’re over!”
9
Chapter
Baby steps
It was time for Angelica to go to bed; they were back to their little apartment and as Tina approached her to kiss her goodnight the child spoke: “Is it my fault that we had to leave?”
“None of this is your fault, sweetie” the mother assured her kid. Just as she was going to kiss her she heart the doorbell, “I’ll be right back” she whispered, smiling.
She made her way toward the front door and opened it. It was Bette… it took her one second to close the door again, leaving a stunned Bette starting at the closed door. The brunette knocked again. And Tina, since she’s a nice woman, didn’t have the courage to let her stand like an idiot out there. She opened the door.
“Listen, I know I was a jerk” Bette admitted. “Just please, give me the chance to apologize”
“I’m not the one you have to apologize to”
“Okay”
The two of them made their way to Angie’s room. Tina entered it and sweetly talked to her daughter “Baby, Miss Porter is here and she has something to say to you. Would you talk to her?” the little girl just nodded and turn onto her side, giving her back to the door, so she could not see Bette.
The brunette entered the room and started her apology, “I’m sorry Angelica” she waited for the kid to say something, but she didn’t so she continued “What can I do to make you forgive me?”
“A pony would be nice”
“A pony?” Bette raised her brows; Tina just smiled. Then trying to drive away the tension, “Look, I’m really sorry, Angie. I was…”
“Stupid?” Angelica finished her sentence.
Tina snorted; Bette looked at her stunned “Yeah… yes, really stupid” she took a deep breath, “Can you forgive me?”
“I guess so. I didn’t mean to mess up your desk” the child said.
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Exquisite!!! Fucking fantastic!! Wow I love your story. .really really…
Wow! Thanks a lot. I’m really glad you liked it.
Hey BOP!
I love your stories and i super love this particular one. Hope to read more of ur future stories :)
Thank you, scribe! I’m loving yours as well and I’m so looking forward to reading more! ;)
A wonderful story .. Thank you !!
Thank you for reading it and leaving a conment!
I absolutely loved this story! Brilliant didn’t want it to end! Can you post a sequel please!
Perhaps The Second Christmas Gift?
Thank you!
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Maybe I’ll think about a new story for Xmas 2014! :)
That would be nice – I’ll look forward to it.
Finally finished reading and a promise is a promise. Like I told you when we twitted, I’ve been following you for sometime. I’ve always liked your writing style. You have been one of my favorites. Your writing’s awesome and your stories make me feel right there w/ your characters. you have made me cringe with your teasing when it seems to be the end of our gals relationships! Then….bam!..you get them together. What a effing tease you are BetteOPorter! love it…keep us guessing and reaching for the Kleenex…don’t stop writing…glad you liked my ‘gift’ via utube.~~keep up your great work BOP!!!…..kingg(as you can see, this gal is an Elvis freak!)