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The Christmas Gift
“You rented her, remember?” Bette smirked, teasing her friend, as she adjusted her gloves. Then the brunette approached Mrs. Peabody “Enjoying yourself? I know it’s colder than what you are used to, here”
“It’s okay. I’m enjoying watching your wife and daughter having so much fun together” she said, pointing to mother and daughter. They were chasing after each other, running around a giant Christmas tree. Bette couldn’t help but smile as she stared at them. She nodded, “Yeah”. It was so good watching at them, Peggy was right.
After a while, Angelica started to skate all across the rink and Peggy approached her “Are you good to skate, Angie?” the kid nodded and smiled proudly.
“Well, I think your mother needs a little help” she turned to look at Bette, who was standing outside the rink, with arms crossed, and lightly bored. Every now and then she would keep herself from falling, because of the skates. Angelica smiled shyly and then decided to approach the brunette.
“Mrs. Peabody told me to help you”
“Oh she did?” she said laughing nervously. “I can’t skate”
“That’s not a big deal, I’m teaching you. Come on!” Angie took her hand.
“Uh, no, I’d better stay here”
“Sure you can. My mommy taught me, and now I’m going to teach you”
“No, listen. I couldn’t do it when I was a kid and I won’t now either”
“There’s no need to be afraid!” she said, pulling Bette on the rink with her.
“Oh God, Angie. That’s not a good idea” she tried to grab the railing but she failed miserably “Angie!” Bette panicked, finding herself in the middle of the rink. “Uh oh! God, if I fall down I’m going to make a complete fool of myself” she said, grabbing Angelica’s arms, to steady herself.
“I get you, I promise” Angie reassured her. And Bette couldn’t help but smile at her. She was starting to love that kid. She was just so cute, she just needed to look at her and every sense of anxiety and nervousness was gone in a second. “Promise?”
Angelica smiled, “Cross my heart, hope to die. Stick a needle in my eye” she exclaimed, drawing an imaginary cross on her chest, making Bette chuckle. The child got to Bette’s side and took her hand. “Now, keep your ankles straight” she started her little lesson. Bette did as she said. “That’s good, now skate” Angelica uttered, slowly dragging Bette. Both of them started to move.
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Exquisite!!! Fucking fantastic!! Wow I love your story. .really really…
Wow! Thanks a lot. I’m really glad you liked it.
Hey BOP!
I love your stories and i super love this particular one. Hope to read more of ur future stories :)
Thank you, scribe! I’m loving yours as well and I’m so looking forward to reading more! ;)
A wonderful story .. Thank you !!
Thank you for reading it and leaving a conment!
I absolutely loved this story! Brilliant didn’t want it to end! Can you post a sequel please!
Perhaps The Second Christmas Gift?
Thank you!
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Maybe I’ll think about a new story for Xmas 2014! :)
That would be nice – I’ll look forward to it.
Finally finished reading and a promise is a promise. Like I told you when we twitted, I’ve been following you for sometime. I’ve always liked your writing style. You have been one of my favorites. Your writing’s awesome and your stories make me feel right there w/ your characters. you have made me cringe with your teasing when it seems to be the end of our gals relationships! Then….bam!..you get them together. What a effing tease you are BetteOPorter! love it…keep us guessing and reaching for the Kleenex…don’t stop writing…glad you liked my ‘gift’ via utube.~~keep up your great work BOP!!!…..kingg(as you can see, this gal is an Elvis freak!)