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The Christmas Gift
“Let her go”
“But, Bette?” she showed her the contract.
“Just let her go!” she smiled as she grabbed the piece of paper from Alice’s hand and ripped it. She looked at Tina who smiled back. Bette approached her and pulled an arm around her waist, as they made their way toward the couch, where Angie and Marcus were sitting together.
“So, for how long are you staying?” Tina asked him.
“Um, actually, I’m leaving tonight?”
“Tonight?” the kid whined. Tina just shook her head; Bette could’ve slapped him. The little girl stood up and sat on the chair opposite the couch. Giving his father her back.
“I really hope you’re going to tell her good-bye, this time” Tina said in a stern tone, looking at the man, who just nodded and approached his daughter.
“Listen baby cakes, daddy really needs to go away, I just can’t stay”
“But you never stay!” she cried.
“I know, baby. That’s why I’m telling you this. I’m not good at this, you deserve someone who no matter what will stay with you and give you all the love you deserve. And I think you already found that person” he sighed. Tina looked at Bette, who swallowed and looked down at the floor.
“You will always be my favorite girl” his voice cracked, “I love you, good-bye” he said as he gave her a little peck on her forehead. He quickly approached the door, without looking back. Bette and Tina silently cursing him for hurting their little girl once more time. Angelica was there, crying and calling for her dad and without giving Tina or Bette the time to react, she rushed out the house, trying to reach Marcus. The two women quickly followed her and a huge sense of fear crossed Tina’s body, “Oh my God she’s following the car!”
“Angie!” Bette called her name, “Angie, please stop!” she ran as fast as she could in order to get to her. Tina was right behind her; hoping that nothing was going to happen to her little girl. Then she heard a deafening noise, the noise tires do when you press the brake. She closed her eyes, fearing for the worse. Then silence… she opened them and she looked at Marcus’ car turn away, and Bette sat on the ground holding Angelica. A car right next to them which its own driver managed to stop.
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tibettenation1 says
Exquisite!!! Fucking fantastic!! Wow I love your story. .really really…
Bette0Porter says
Wow! Thanks a lot. I’m really glad you liked it.
scribe says
Hey BOP!
I love your stories and i super love this particular one. Hope to read more of ur future stories :)
Bette0Porter says
Thank you, scribe! I’m loving yours as well and I’m so looking forward to reading more! ;)
pinky3001 says
A wonderful story .. Thank you !!
Bette0Porter says
Thank you for reading it and leaving a conment!
SassyGran says
I absolutely loved this story! Brilliant didn’t want it to end! Can you post a sequel please!
Perhaps The Second Christmas Gift?
Thank you!
Bette0Porter says
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Maybe I’ll think about a new story for Xmas 2014! :)
SassyGran says
That would be nice – I’ll look forward to it.
kingg says
Finally finished reading and a promise is a promise. Like I told you when we twitted, I’ve been following you for sometime. I’ve always liked your writing style. You have been one of my favorites. Your writing’s awesome and your stories make me feel right there w/ your characters. you have made me cringe with your teasing when it seems to be the end of our gals relationships! Then….bam!..you get them together. What a effing tease you are BetteOPorter! love it…keep us guessing and reaching for the Kleenex…don’t stop writing…glad you liked my ‘gift’ via utube.~~keep up your great work BOP!!!…..kingg(as you can see, this gal is an Elvis freak!)