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The Christmas Gift
“God, Alice! That’s great, how did you convince her to finance us?”
“Well, let’s say I convinced her that you are a very-very lovely woman and…” she started saying but the stopped and looked at her, trying to continue her sentence, but something was restraining her from finishing it.
“And?” a now quasi-scared Bette asked.
“And wife and mother” a super-scared Alice replied, shutting her eyes closed, fearing Bette’s reaction.
“WHAT?!” well, at least she didn’t kill her… yet.
“Yes, well, she… she started talking about her daughter and her grandchildren. And she said that her daughter wasn’t that good when it comes to family and things like that, she’s a workaholic, money lover… Let’s say she’s just like… you. BUT, seeing that Mrs. Peabody isn’t really amused by that kind of behavior, I decided that a little white lie couldn’t kill someone. So, I started to tell her how wonderful you are with your child and wife and how much you love to spend the time with them…”
“Well, as long as I’m not going to demonstrate her that, it may had been a good idea, yeah…” she stopped and gazed at her friend, “Why do I sense that there is something else?”
“Yeah, well, um” Alice stammered, “It was a good idea, until she proposed to come visit you, and your family, and spend Christmas Holidays here, with all of you”
“I’m going to kill you!”
“Okay, you will kill me later… I just need to tell you that there is one more little thing”
“What else? You told her something else about my life I didn’t know?”
“Nope, she wants to move this mall, the one in Manhattan, to somewhere else. She said, since there are plenty of them here, it’s not good for the business. That’s why we’re losing customers. Concurrency is a bitch, and she thought that moving the mall may be a good idea. Especially if we move it to a place where there aren’t plenty of them”
“But, that means that a lot of employees, here, will lose their jobs”
“Since when do you care about others?”
“Alice, I’m not a monster!”
“Let’s see if this will make you change your mind” Alice got closer, she brought her mouth to Bette’s ear and whispered something to her.
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Exquisite!!! Fucking fantastic!! Wow I love your story. .really really…
Wow! Thanks a lot. I’m really glad you liked it.
Hey BOP!
I love your stories and i super love this particular one. Hope to read more of ur future stories :)
Thank you, scribe! I’m loving yours as well and I’m so looking forward to reading more! ;)
A wonderful story .. Thank you !!
Thank you for reading it and leaving a conment!
I absolutely loved this story! Brilliant didn’t want it to end! Can you post a sequel please!
Perhaps The Second Christmas Gift?
Thank you!
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Maybe I’ll think about a new story for Xmas 2014! :)
That would be nice – I’ll look forward to it.
Finally finished reading and a promise is a promise. Like I told you when we twitted, I’ve been following you for sometime. I’ve always liked your writing style. You have been one of my favorites. Your writing’s awesome and your stories make me feel right there w/ your characters. you have made me cringe with your teasing when it seems to be the end of our gals relationships! Then….bam!..you get them together. What a effing tease you are BetteOPorter! love it…keep us guessing and reaching for the Kleenex…don’t stop writing…glad you liked my ‘gift’ via utube.~~keep up your great work BOP!!!…..kingg(as you can see, this gal is an Elvis freak!)