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The Door – Chapter 1
The Door
Chapter 1
I stood before the closed door as I had many a time before. This was no ordinary door, it was a very special door, the one that led to the room we had shared. The one where the memories of a lifetime together had been made. It was our sanctuary, our “comfy place”. The one place where together, we could retreat to close out everything and everyone from our busy lives.
Many a day I had walked down the hallway of my house and found myself before this door, but each time I would never enter. There were times when I would find the courage to place my hand on the door knob, thinking that “this time I will”, “this is the time I will be able to do it”, but I never did. Some how, I just could not bear to turn the handle.
What was different about today? I had a renewed feeling of confidence, a renewed feeling of hope and of peace. She had provided that today. Today was a new beginning. So yet again I was before this door, hand on the knob, slowly turning it, gently pushing forward to reveal the room hidden behind the door…….
Earlier that day……
It was an early Saturday morning like so many before it. I pulled into the parking lot of the supermarket, found a parking spot and exited my car. Making my way into the store I secured a cart and began my trek up and down the aisles. This was a fairly new task for me. Grocery shopping. What an awful requirement in my busy life to have to undertake such an insane endeavor. What sane person would want to do this on a regular basis? But, a girl had to eat right?
The frustration of people who stopped to chat with neighbors in the middle of the aisles, blocking the way to get by for people like me who had very little patience to begin with. It was a pleasant discovery to find that if you came really early in the morning, the crowds were not as big and you could quite easily get through your list without too many interruptions or distractions. So here I was, tackling my list.
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(43 votes, average: 3.51 out of 5)
Taz…this is very intriguing…I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Interesting! What’s going to happen next?
*sigh* Tazzie you are another one who I will never fail to stop encouraging. You are an awesome writer who I easily find myself prepared to click for that NEXT PAGE which is never there. Why you ask? Well, because the story always flows so easily that I cannot believe I have already hit page 2 or 3 or 4… This was a surprise on this windy evening here in New England. I held my breath quite a few times as I read where Bette would put her hand on that door knob. Your description was spot on throughout. Thanks so much Spazzie-Taz, I love when you have that creative puff of magic enter your mind. TTYS!
Taz, we love your stories. You know were hooked on Ang and Lyndsay. This is looking interesting also. YOur a great writer. What is it with writers and their egos? You can do it Taz we have faith in you.
Ooh, very intriguing. Can’t wait to see where this leads.
This sounds very interesting…but only three chapters?
Hey Tazzie! *waving with enthusiasm* This story seems pretty interesting. The way you are bringing it to life is so poignant. The way you describe the feelings, the actions, the dialogues and the unspoken words is so thorough, that we can watch every scene flow in front of our very eyes. We are looking forward to your next update. This is so good, we can wait for your muses to come back with Angie and Linds. PPS Lucero & Marsha (Latin JC’s Salsa Aunties)
Taz, this was a great begining and very interesting. I’m sure that meeting was unnerving for both of them. Please hurry back with chapter two, I can hardly wait. PPS
I’ll forgive you for no posting and A & L chaper. This is a great start. I echo what Chicki has said. Taz hope you post anoher soon.
OH I FELT SCARED TOO…LOVE YOUR STORIES…will wait patiently for Lynds and Ange which i just love.
WOW…Taz…amazing…shoo.I am speechless…I love your writing and cant wait to read more..lets hope there is more than just 3 chapters!!Thanks girl..really awesome!!
this was great..I can’t wait for more. I think you could turn this into a story of many, many chapters. pps
Wow, tthis has left me sad.I felt Bette’s pain. Looking forward to many chapters of these two finding their way back to each other.
More more more of The Door.
Lot of people has been to the door, I have maded a promise to myself that I will open the door Nov 5 This is a awecome start can’t believe that only three chapters thanks