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The Elevator
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“We’re just…, we’re going to see Dan Foxworthy…”
“Why?” Kit asked me with that look of confusion that I knew I wouldn’t be able to ease.
“So we can…, be the best parents to Angie as we can…, you know with living apart and…”
“There’s something going on isn’t there?”
I looked at her in the eye and took a breath, “I have to go…”
Kit shook her head at me and sighed, “honey…, I don’t have to tell you about playing with fire…”
“I know…”
“Come here…” Kit said as she walked towards me with her arms outstretched, “I love you baby girl…”
“I love you too Kit…”
“You love her too don’t you…?”
“I never stopped…”
“Don’t get burnt…”
I smiled as I retreated from her embrace, “I won’t…”
I drove to Tina’s apartment with the air conditioning on full blast, the humidity was incredibly intense and I could already feel the beads of perspiration building on my skin.
I saw her walking to the car, looking incredibly sexy in a blue dress. What was it about her that raised my temperature another notch on a never ending scale?
There was that swallowing motion in my throat again, the one that wouldn’t work properly when she was near me, but this time it was seeing her long legs as the material of her dress shifted upwards as she got into the car.
I’m not sure I ever suffered from palpitations but if the raised heart rate and rapid breathing was anything to go by in terms of symptoms, then I think I was a text book case in the making.
“Hey…,” she leaned over and pecked my cheek, her eyes sparkling with that gorgeous smile that only she could emit.
“Hi…” I said in the only sound that would leave my lips.
“How are you coping with this humidity?”
I smiled to myself, “I was coping okay…,” ‘until you got into the car’ were the words that I wanted to add, but didn’t.
She smiled, was she doing that mind reading thing again, I wondered as her eyes searched mine, I merely smirked at her, I think she knew what the rest of the sentence would have included.
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Mate, that was …..*** THUD *** You write the NC17’s with such taste and class. There is a line between writing smut and writing the stuff that says it all. I was surprised reading the whole elevator spoilers, as I have a fic I had developed last year and am working through now, that surround them being stuck in an elevator! So much for timing eh? LOL! ANYWAY….before I make this long winded (s-h-h-h-h-hhhh), I think it was once again a brilliant craft. There is such a difference in making love with someone that you love deeply, and having sex. This is written with the depth of that love in mind, and it manifests in the image you painted for us the readers. Oh…and this line “I moved her thong to one side, the skimpy material making me wonder whether it was even worth her putting underwear on at all.” That is SO true, sometimes it isn’t worth it at all. LOL! Thanks Jo, and get some sleep.
I think I just creamed my pants :D..LOL!!!
Jo, no rust at all… just as I imagined that scene! Thanks for making it even more exciting! Is it time to see 509 yet? =)
Thanks for upping my anticipation of the actual scene on my screen. This was really beautiful. It wasn’t some sex scene. It was really about the connection, the coming home feeling, the way that Tina makes Bette feel something she doesn’t for any other human being.. and that is what made this scene hot. Thanks.
Whoa, now I have to take a cold shower. That was magnificently written. I, well, I just….ummm…yeah…cold shower. ;)
oh Jobadge, that as great! wow, that was hot!! I hope episode 9 is as entertaining. I could see it so clearly in my mind as I read it. As always, you are fantastic!
this was great though in your version they didn’t do much talking LOL
OMG….I just had to pick myself up off of the floor. You are amazing and thank you for that one!
Sweet Jesus!…That was Goddamn HOT!…The heat wasnt only in the elevator…my poor screen is puffing out smoke here!.lol..Im thinking a Marlboro Moment???.or a cold shower!lol..Brillent as always.
That was an incredible chapter of love, and lust. They can not seem to get enough of each other. I hope that Dan can help them work through what is keeping them apart.
Rusty is definitely NOT a word I would ever tie to anything that you write. You are one of the few writers able to emulate the love between B&T and the chemistry that LH & JB ooze on screen. Nobody does it better Jo!
Damn thats hot!
Jo, you have definitely NOT lost your touch! That was breathtaking …literally.
Rusty? Far from it! Very nice post. Hope you’ll post more stories soon.
Thank you for sharing another amazing story! This was really, really nice.
Wow you have left nothing for us to say, you always rise above anything and everything that we read or feel, my God it should have been (***NC17) it really touched my heart, the love that they share is too powerful to be denied or neglected, thank you for this amazing chapter. You are one of the best.with all my love
NOTHING RUSTY ABOUT THEM OR U!!!
haven’t been in here in ages – but here I am & this caught my eye – WOW – THanks Jo.
WOW!!!!!!
Damn! I needed that! Hope the version on the show is just as good.
OMG that was writen with such love and tenderness…WOW :)
Ms Jo, if you thought you were a bit rusty, I don’t think my heart could stand it if you were in top form. Honey, there is nothing rusty about your writing, and it lacks nothing. What a way to wake up on sunday morning with the anticipation of tonght’s episode. Always love to read your stories, no one can write our girls quite like you do. You wirte them with such love, tenderness, passion and respect for each other that is it incomparable, you never leave doubt that that the love they feel for each other isall encompassing and only, only for the other. There is no other love like theirs and everyone can see it and feel and wish for it for themselves. Thank you for being such a wonderful writer and sharing your love for our girls.
Hello Jo, Great to have this new and wonderful addition from you. I truly adore your writing. The heat you generate with your loquacious and effusive words steamed up my screen and left me feeling a little moist myself. Wow wee!! Gal you hit the nail firmly on the head as Bette and Tina consummated their love without the discussion. Now I would love your take on their processing with Dan. These gals do need to talk things out to balance the mind and spirit with the perfection that their physical love brings. More puh-lease. Many, many thanks for making today red-hot. Your Loyal Fan.
SEEE! You kno, that is exactly how I imagined it, when I heard about some elevator scene!, That scene best be HOT!, coz in Elevators, Shii happens! omg, omg, omg, omg, omg, lol
WOW!!!Jo, that was so loving and heart felt. Rusty I think not. I have not read any spoilers but damn I can not wait for tonight. Thank you
Yep…. Shes done it again… Its jobadgtified… ;) We’ll all be wacthing with this in mind, truely amazing, my friend! As has been said, the depths of the love are indeed palpable through your style, and it nearly made this molly cry… Thanks!hugshake!
too stunned to comment the first time around that i read this….as we get closer to 509, thought i’d build up my anticipation even more by reading this….am now beginning to think that was a very “bad” idea – this was great, i can honestly say you are one of few writers that i will thank for leaving me sexually frustrated!! ;)