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    The Elevator

    Story written on February 23, 2008 by Jobadge.
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    Explicit Spoilers for Episode 9. Some times when the physical and emotional wound together so tightly that she consumed my every breath.

     

    We parked outside of the same large modern building that we had visited on many occasions before. Occasions that were both useful, painful and destructive. I’d also visited on my own as well, those occasions were the ones that had helped me grow as a person, allowed to me look back and learn about myself as a person in the behaviours and feelings I had expressed at the time.

     

    I was no longer against therapy, in fact it was my suggestion that we come here today, if our future was to be one together then it had to be for the right reasons and it had to be forever.

     

    I know for sure that there would never be anyone in my life who compared to her and I had accepted that we had both changed from the people we were when we met, we had grown. 

     

    But the most growth had come from the time we had apart and the facts of the way we had conducted our lives up to this point was sentiment to the fact that we had never stopped loving one another, we just needed to be allowed to nurture the fact.

     

    “T…”

     

    She smiled at me as we waited for the elevator, it was an endearment I hadn’t used in a long time, nevertheless it still felt right.

     

    “Yeah?”

     

    We stepped inside the large elevator, the coolness of the air conditioning hit us as my skin puckered with goose bumps.

     

    “Are you sure, you know…, I just want to make sure you still wanna do this?”

     

    “Of course, I think it will be good for us…, it’s what we should have done a long time ago…”

     

    I sighed as the doors slid closed, it was the same thought I had so many times, it was one of the things that we used to do, think the same thoughts and then one of us would say it aloud…, it was freaky on occasion dependant on the thought processes that we were having…, “I know…, I know we should have…”

     

    “But the most important thing…”

     

    “Is that we’re doing it now…” I said.

     

    “And for the right reasons…”

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    1. Mate, that was …..*** THUD *** You write the NC17’s with such taste and class. There is a line between writing smut and writing the stuff that says it all. I was surprised reading the whole elevator spoilers, as I have a fic I had developed last year and am working through now, that surround them being stuck in an elevator! So much for timing eh? LOL! ANYWAY….before I make this long winded (s-h-h-h-h-hhhh), I think it was once again a brilliant craft. There is such a difference in making love with someone that you love deeply, and having sex. This is written with the depth of that love in mind, and it manifests in the image you painted for us the readers. Oh…and this line “I moved her thong to one side, the skimpy material making me wonder whether it was even worth her putting underwear on at all.” That is SO true, sometimes it isn’t worth it at all. LOL! Thanks Jo, and get some sleep.

    4. Thanks for upping my anticipation of the actual scene on my screen. This was really beautiful. It wasn’t some sex scene. It was really about the connection, the coming home feeling, the way that Tina makes Bette feel something she doesn’t for any other human being.. and that is what made this scene hot. Thanks.

    6. oh Jobadge, that as great! wow, that was hot!! I hope episode 9 is as entertaining. I could see it so clearly in my mind as I read it. As always, you are fantastic!

    9. Sweet Jesus!…That was Goddamn HOT!…The heat wasnt only in the elevator…my poor screen is puffing out smoke here!.lol..Im thinking a Marlboro Moment???.or a cold shower!lol..Brillent as always.

    10. That was an incredible chapter of love, and lust. They can not seem to get enough of each other. I hope that Dan can help them work through what is keeping them apart.

    11. Rusty is definitely NOT a word I would ever tie to anything that you write. You are one of the few writers able to emulate the love between B&T and the chemistry that LH & JB ooze on screen. Nobody does it better Jo!

    16. Wow you have left nothing for us to say, you always rise above anything and everything that we read or feel, my God it should have been (***NC17) it really touched my heart, the love that they share is too powerful to be denied or neglected, thank you for this amazing chapter. You are one of the best.with all my love

    22. Ms Jo, if you thought you were a bit rusty, I don’t think my heart could stand it if you were in top form. Honey, there is nothing rusty about your writing, and it lacks nothing. What a way to wake up on sunday morning with the anticipation of tonght’s episode. Always love to read your stories, no one can write our girls quite like you do. You wirte them with such love, tenderness, passion and respect for each other that is it incomparable, you never leave doubt that that the love they feel for each other isall encompassing and only, only for the other. There is no other love like theirs and everyone can see it and feel and wish for it for themselves. Thank you for being such a wonderful writer and sharing your love for our girls.

    23. Hello Jo, Great to have this new and wonderful addition from you. I truly adore your writing. The heat you generate with your loquacious and effusive words steamed up my screen and left me feeling a little moist myself. Wow wee!! Gal you hit the nail firmly on the head as Bette and Tina consummated their love without the discussion. Now I would love your take on their processing with Dan. These gals do need to talk things out to balance the mind and spirit with the perfection that their physical love brings. More puh-lease. Many, many thanks for making today red-hot. Your Loyal Fan.

    24. SEEE! You kno, that is exactly how I imagined it, when I heard about some elevator scene!, That scene best be HOT!, coz in Elevators, Shii happens! omg, omg, omg, omg, omg, lol

    26. Yep…. Shes done it again… Its jobadgtified… ;) We’ll all be wacthing with this in mind, truely amazing, my friend! As has been said, the depths of the love are indeed palpable through your style, and it nearly made this molly cry… Thanks!hugshake!

    27. too stunned to comment the first time around that i read this….as we get closer to 509, thought i’d build up my anticipation even more by reading this….am now beginning to think that was a very “bad” idea – this was great, i can honestly say you are one of few writers that i will thank for leaving me sexually frustrated!! ;)

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