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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Two

    Story written on November 2, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    This wasn’t where she belonged.

    “That’s great Tina, I’m really happy for you.”

    “Thanks. I do appreciate your support. You know that don’t you?”

    “Yeah I know, and it means a lot that you’re there for me too.”

    “We should leave, we don’t want to be late.”

    Eric walked purposely towards the front door, getting there before Tina so that he could open the door for her. As he held the door Tina leant over to kiss him on the cheek, provoking a smile that resonated deep within Eric’s eyes. As they walked towards Eric’s car he took Tina’s hand, enclosing it in his. Wanting her to feel like this was something special. When they reached the car he opened the door for Tina. The little touches were something that meant a lot to Tina. They spoke volumes about the way that Eric felt about her. He had yet to tell her that he was in love with her but she knew that it was coming, she just didn’t know when.

    On the way to the gallery they talked more about what they had done during the day. They talked about mutual friends from the industry that they both worked in. Catching up on the gossip was one of their favourite pastimes. They laughed at the rumours that floated around both their offices about the famous and the nearly famous. It was easy and carefree. Tina didn’t feel any pressure when she was in Eric’s company. She couldn’t decide whether that was a good thing or not. Maybe a little pressure, a little tension might be better. Maybe that was what was lacking, the demand to make a commitment.

    “How are you feeling?” asked Eric as they got out of the car.

    “A little nervous, but other than that OK.”

    “You have nothing to worry about. You look stunning and I know you’ll find people that you like here.”

    “I hope so.” replied Tina, smiling at the way that Eric tried to calm her nerves.

    As they enter the gallery Tina took in the scenery before her. Important looking people taking in important pieces of artwork. For a brief moment Tina could feel herself beginning to panic. This isn’t where she belonged. She belonged in a back of a movie theatre eating popcorn, getting wrapped up in the Hollywood dream. She felt Eric’s hand on her back edging her gently further into the room. He looked so confident, completely in his element. Tina couldn’t help but think that maybe her mother was right, he really was husband material.

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    1. I think every other interpretation I’ve read of their beginning had me hating Eric. Honestly, for once it’s kinda nice to just seem him as a nice guy who gets kinda screwed over. So realistic. Need I mention, great as always?

    2. How can you not love the story of the first meeting. Is Tina telling someone the story, or are just visiting the events that brought her to where she is now?

    4. I absolutely agree with azmama’s comment. Just when i think that all the B & T beginning stories have been done, along comes this story. Wonderfully written ! PPS.

    6. Gotta agree with the others this is one of the best beginnings I’ve read. Can’t wait to read about the journey to the melancholy of Chapter 1. Thanks!

    7. I loved this chapter of how B&T met. What bothers me though is Tina now realizing that she has lost the most important thing in her life and she has hit rock bottom (coming from reading the first chapter)? And is there any chance of Bette and Tina talking out all of their problems and starting over?

    13. Wow, the best earring scene I’ve ever read! You had me liking Eric for a split second! Glad that didn’t last! So are we going to recall everything up to the point of Tina in the bar?? Hope so. Great story mate!

    14. CG…This is so good. The talent and imagination that one can find in this group of fanfic writers never ceases to amaze me. When I think how can another B & T beginning be novel, along comes your story. How delicious!

    16. ok, continue from there…forget the whole bar, tears etc…keep writing from there, pls…Your writing just sucks me in, grabs me and won’t let go…

    17. Nice!I had a momentary brain fart when I thought the bartender was Eric, but then I realized “wait the bartender was a woman”!lol You write so well and Jobadge is right one of the best earring scene! Thanks and Post soon!

    18. Amazing CG. Now I’m really,really,intruiged with this story. I really need to know how Tina got in that state she was in last chapter. Please post as soon as possible.

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