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The Gift
“Code blue” Tina faintly heard someone shouting
She was all alone Bette was probably with that woman her heart ached even more. She didn’t doubt it for a second not once did Bette doubt she was having an affair, Tina inwardly groaned as her heart continued to ache.
“I’m losing her” someone shouted as Tina felt electric shock through her body.
“I’m dying” She thought. It would make Bette so happy if I just died, then she’ll be free and happy to love someone else, with that last thought Tina saw a bright white beckoning to her.
“I love you, Bette” She shouted as she walked into that beautiful light.
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Dana, Alice and Shane watched on as Tina died right in front of them the tears spilled from their eyes as they all heard Tina’s final words “I love you, Bette”
Where the hell was Bette they all thought but now they were thinking how should we tell Bette.
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She slowly made her way inside of the house calling out Tina’s name. The sun had just risen casting an eerie glow throughout the house for some reason this made Bette feel a little uncomfortable. There was no answer to Bette’s call. “She’s not back yet” Bette thought getting a little irritated, she walked into the kitchen to get some water her stomach was still a little sore from the earlier purging incident.
The house felt deadly silent Bette grimaced at the thought. She walked back to the living room noticing the message light blinking on the phone. She pressed play
“you have twenty four new messages……… message one I’m sorry to inform you miss Porter but your name was stated as an Emergency contact for Miss Tina Kennard who has just been admitted here Memorial Hospital ….” That was all Bette heard as she right into her car and drove to the hospital her guilty conscious beating her down. All the hurt and pain I’d caused her.
“Tina please be okay, you have to be okay. What will I do without you?”
She arrived at the emergency room running inside like a mad woman when she saw the gang all shedding tears the look of pain on each their face and Bette knew she had lost the most precious thing in her life.
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(22 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
Ouch my heart hurts
Wow that was fucking intense. I pretty much cried.
God, that hurt so much. If this isn’t a one-off, let Maxine send her back, she has learned her lesson.
That was so damn sad!
That was a painful story to read but a darn good one at that.
:((( cant stop crying
Andy thanks for sharing this :o) you wrote it nicely but the story itself is …Ugh… Such a depressing story :-( the affair, the separation for good, and how Bette makes life so meaningless…
excellent made me cry thank you.
Oh damn this is so sad and hurt alot.
The ultimate sacrifice! :0(
OMG,so sad.PPS.
andy84803–Your post is fantastic, with wonderful story telling and great writing. You can tell from the comments that readers were enmeshed in the world you had created, so much so that you have evoked strong emotions. Please please do not be discouraged by the 4-stars. It reflects readers’ response to any story in which either Bette or Tina dies. It has nothing to do with the quality of your wRiting or story telling I am certain that you steeled yourself against that reaction when you posted but I am sure that it still hurts. Please keep writing and sharing with us,