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The Gift
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The gang looked on hating Bette but still feeling her sorrow and heartache.
A security guard had approached Bette holding her back so that the men could take Tina down to the mortuary.
“No” Bette tried to push him off “Where are you taking her” she screamed Bette escaped it from him running after Tina.
“Tina” she screamed but was stopped by another guard “Tina, Tina” Shane ran over to help Bette who just had just took a swing at the guard hitting her mark she took after Tina again but was tackled to the ground by another guard it took three guards and Shane to hold Bette down all the while she kept screaming Tina’s name over and over again.
“Tinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” Bette let a bloodcurdling scream, the sound of a woman in pain indescribable pain.
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She had been sedated by a doctor after her outburst in the emergency room, Bette rubbed her eyes hoping the blinding light of the hospital would leave her alone. Tina she thought the pain returned so hard Bette winced as the tears poured from her eye like a tap. Tina was gone and Bette was left alone to suffer in her the agony of her own making.
It should have been me, I’m the one that’s suppose to be lying like a slab on the stretcher, I’m the piece of shit that should be dead right now not Tee. Bette let out another bloodcurdling scream “I’m the one that should be dead”
“Are you sure about that” said a voice. Bette’s head whipped around to the sound of the voice.
There stood her mother dressed in all over white “Mom” Bette said wiping her eyes.
Her mother nodded
“But you’re…. dead” Bette said stupidly
Maxine just smiled at Bette” Let’s just skip all the pleasantries, I’m so disappointed in you Elizabeth, the way you treated Tina these last few months was unforgivable”
Bette lowered her head in shame “I know” she whispered “Tina really loved me that’s why she stayed and broke her heart till I killed her……she must hate me”
“What would you do if given a second chance” Maxine asked
“I would stop her, I would gladly give my life for her” Bette choked out
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Ouch my heart hurts
Wow that was fucking intense. I pretty much cried.
God, that hurt so much. If this isn’t a one-off, let Maxine send her back, she has learned her lesson.
That was so damn sad!
That was a painful story to read but a darn good one at that.
:((( cant stop crying
Andy thanks for sharing this :o) you wrote it nicely but the story itself is …Ugh… Such a depressing story :-( the affair, the separation for good, and how Bette makes life so meaningless…
excellent made me cry thank you.
Oh damn this is so sad and hurt alot.
The ultimate sacrifice! :0(
OMG,so sad.PPS.
andy84803–Your post is fantastic, with wonderful story telling and great writing. You can tell from the comments that readers were enmeshed in the world you had created, so much so that you have evoked strong emotions. Please please do not be discouraged by the 4-stars. It reflects readers’ response to any story in which either Bette or Tina dies. It has nothing to do with the quality of your wRiting or story telling I am certain that you steeled yourself against that reaction when you posted but I am sure that it still hurts. Please keep writing and sharing with us,