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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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Chapter 19
LA 2025
“I think we’ve lost him” Bette stated the obvious as they both glanced at a sleeping Shane sandwiched between them.
“Bless him, Al really freaked him out” Tina said just above a whisper
Bette looked puzzled.
“He thought we all ate kittens”
“Eh”
“Pussy Bette” Tina clarified with a smile despite the fact she disliked that particular terminology.
Bette raised her eyebrows and broke out in a giggle at the blush that now flushed Tina’s cheeks, even after all these years her wife was just too damn cute. “Come here you”
Tina rose from her side of the bed and ambled over to Bette causing no disturbance to their sleeping grandson.
They quickly settled into their usual positions and were content simply lying there listening to the other breathing despite the occasional outbreak of laughter from the other room.
Just for a little while they both put what was never far from their thoughts since Tina’s diagnosis, Monday and the operation was put to the far recess’s of their minds.“Mmmmmm, we don’t do this enough” Bette whispered into Tina’s ear.
‘What have a house full of craziness”
“No this, just cuddle without it being a prelude to something else, sleep, sex, saying goodbye, this is nice”
“Nice?” Tina questioned feeling a little affronted, ice cream was nice, coffee was nice, even on the odd occasion she had been pushed to describe Helena as nice but to label laying in your one and only’s arms as nice was unsatisfactory in anyone’s book of relationship do’s and do not’s. “Nice?” Tina repeated only this time with a little more venom than the original levity.
Bette was a little taken aback at Tina’s reaction to a simple ill advised choice of words but then this seemed to be happening more and more of late “Did I say nice? What I meant was this is heaven” Bette attempted to pull Tina closer however Tina pulled away
“Bullshit” Tina spat
“Tee, come on, I was really enjoying just laying here with you, please don’t spoil it” Bette pleaded
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Im i seeing things Skimmy posted a chptr.well the chptr was sad i almost cried during the operation and afterwards excellent post, now please dont take soo long posting again.
I have missed this story, so glad that you are back with it!!! Poor Tina,I know that you will make everything ok!!PPS
Fantastic chapter. Their remembrances of their life together was really sweet and loving. Did I miss the heart attack part or did you just not write it for us. That was a huge surprise when I read it. Hopefully Tina and Bette will be fine. Thanks for coming back and posting. Really missed this story. PPS
Skimmer, you had me really, really worried there. Then it was alright when Tina remembered Bette forgetting the shoes and Shane poking fun at them standing in the middle of a monsoon after their wedding vows. And now… Now I’m worried again. Tina’s just got to be okay. And you have got to post again soon. Thank you for this chapter, skimmer, I loved it! :)
I’m trying to remember how Shane met Bette and Tina. Was she homeless? And great story, of course! I’m so glad you’re back!
Wow – “I’ll ask you to marry me every day”. You made me cry and I don’t cry very often while reading these stories. I too have missed this one. You are an excellent writer.
I have truly missed this story – what a beautiful chapter. Please don´t stay away too long again.
hey there – you have me crying here and thats not good. You are going to make it right aren’t you ? thats not a suggestion – thats an order. You want to be locked in a room with emazon ? it can be arranged. That was really good mate – now what about the OTHER story ? ya remember ??
I cried like….I loss someone i loved…especially in the operating room? god?……..I can’t think i can do it?..if someone I love is lying in there….And making a decision whether to continue or not……Hey finally caught you!…We’ve been trying to make to update this story in the other site?..would you still post it there?….MANY OF YOUR READERS ARE DYING FOR AN UPDATE!
What a wonderful update, but a heck of a cliffhanger, I hope you post soon.
No you won’t let that happen, will you?Welcomeback with the story but please don’t let anything happen to Tina. Without her Bette is a wreck. PPVS
Welcome back Skimmer! I have so missed this story. Was so sad and just absolutely amazing at the same time. Please post soon. thank you again for posting. Brilliant!
You made me cry ,then laugh and now you’ve gotten me worried again. thanks for posting.
hi thanks for a very touching chapter,hope you will come back soon!
Wooh,this story is nice! I wish that you will have time to come back and complete it some day. Thanks.
Skimmer, this is such a good story, it deserves a happy ending.
I hope that you will finish it. It doesn’t matter that it that has been a few years that you posted. Please come back.
I hope that life treats you well!