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The Hunted 16
Somewhere in that twisted logic, Tina could find elements that she identified with. She knew that that was what Bette had done when she’d saved her – put Tina’s life before her own. But now it seemed that all her efforts would be for nothing.
"Does Marina know that you’re doing this?" Tina asked, afraid of the answer.
"Don’t be stupid. She’s too good a person. She’d try and stop me, to protect me"
"But don’t you see, she won’t be happy if you go to jail" Tina tried once more to reason with her.
Helena glared at her "Don’t try and act like you’d have a clue how she’d feel"
"I’m sorry, I just meant…"
"Enough!" Helena interrupted "I’ve had enough of you. You can’t begin to understand how I feel about her, and so there’s no point in talking to you anymore"
"Please Helena" Tina begged.
"Stop! If you stay quiet I’ll make it painless" Helena said, drawing the gun from her jacket pocket.
Tears poured down Tina’s cheeks. All she could think of was Bette, and how she’d never get to kiss her again. How she’d never again lie in those comforting arms. She looked around at the home that she’d spent so many years in, and had never truly appreciated until now. The place was full of memories, good and bad, and most importantly, of Bette.
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Bette arrived at Tina’s house and immediately drew her gun seeing the strange car in the driveway. She ran to the door and pressed her ear to it, trying to listen out for any sounds. Hearing nothing, she pulled the key from her pocket that Tina had given her, and thanked her lucky stars for the blondes foresight. She turned the key gently in the lock and slowly pushed the door open, her gun pointed ahead of her.
Immediately she was greeted by the sight of Helena stood over Tina, gun in hand.
"Bette!" Tina exclaimed, the desperation on her face almost enough to move Bette herself to tears.
Helena spun round to face the door, moving her guns aim to Bette’s chest.
"Put the gun down" Helena snarled.
"I’ll only lower my weapon if you lower yours" Bette replied.
"I don’t make deals, Agent Porter"
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(30 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
Awww.. that was sooo sweet! and don’t worry about the legal stuff.. i don’t know that much about it too!! please, even now that the suspect was discovered… keep posting? please?
How will Peggy feel. this is her daughter?? That was so sweet Porter to the rescue. thanks
yeah bette to the rescue!!! oh boy what will peggy think? will bette quit her job to be with tina???
Great post. Thank you. ‘Legal stuff’ sounds fine to me,but what do I know?
These two sentences next to each other made me laugh: “…please come quick” she stammered. Helena continued to struggle under Bette…” Oh my! ;-)
i hope it’s not the end
Hey Baby, What tension and drama from this latest chapter. I was on tenderhooks as Bette moved towards Tina and Helena. Shame that Peggy was so blind to her daugther’s murderous intent. Bette was brilliant in disarming Helena and rescuing her lover. This really brought home the love between these gals. I do hope that Bette and Tina make a real go of their relationship now that Helena is out of the picture. Good to see the rest of the gang there to assist Bette. Loved it. More please. Many thanks for this creacking tale. Your Loyal Fan.
Whew, you had me stressing! I am glad that Bette got there in time to save Tina. I hope Peggy will understand what happened and let Bette and Tina’s relationship go.
That was freaking awesome and love the way Bette recue Tina and kick Helena’s ass, poor Peggy. B&T are sweet and now let see some B&T love coming. Please post more, thanks!