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The Island – Chapter 13
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Alice called from the doorway every five minutes or so to make sure Dana was OK. This would have bothered her if it was anyone else, but, she loved that Alice was so concerned.
Dana didn’t even try to figure out how to turn the shower off. She got out and dried herself as well as she could and then got into the fresh gown that Alice left. She was very glad to be able to get dressed by herself. She knew she was injured, but, she hated to feel like an invalid. The shower had worn her out more she realized, though.
“Al?” Alice immediately came in the room. She quickly sized up the situation and went over to wrap an arm around Dana’s waist.
“Look at you: pretending to be all wobbly so I will hold you.” Alice said lightly. She was so pleased that Dana had asked for help and she wanted to make sure she knew that Alice didn’t think her weak for doing so. “Come over here and sit down.” Alice assisted Dana over to one of the short, padded stools in front of the mirror. Alice went and shut off the shower and then came back and picked up a comb. “Would this be OK? Not too weird?” Dana gave a sweet smile. “Not at all. It would probably take you a lot less time than it would take me right now.” Alice first grabbed a towel and dried Dana’s hair as much as she could.
Alice started to carefully run the comb through Dana’s hair. Dana almost felt like purring. It felt so relaxing to have someone comb her hair and to know it was Alice and to have her so close to her was just incredible.
For her part, Alice could see how relaxed and serene Dana looked. It felt so powerful to know she was the cause. She spent a bit longer than was actually needed to take care of the task. She was reluctant to lose the closeness she felt to Dana at that point.
She got a hair dryer and set it to a low heat/low air setting. She got Dana’s hair dry and turned her attention to the bandages.
“I can do that, Al…” Dana said half-heartedly.
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AHHHH!!! I was just getting ready to shut down and go home. Whoo, glad i decided to check just ONE more time. LMAO at Al needing to ‘label’ the knobs in the shower…Yeah i’m really glad that bed is so big..You didnt catch me on any of that video sneaking in to check on Al and Dane did you? It was all in good fun. You seriously need to tell me how much this whole live camera feed and the bed sharing is going to cost so i can get the check book ready and work some over time. Awesome job Lil Buddy! I sooo love this daNg freaking story! :D LOVEEEE ;)
Well, now my smile made you smile, which in turn made me smile… aren’t we a happy bunch?? ;) Smiles all around for everyone… okay, getting kind of carrried away here. Hahaha I didn’t even go there with my innocent *ahum*, fragile *double ahum* mind, but yes… Nurse!Alice can rub anything she wants without complaints from me :D Also LMAO at the shower labeling thing. Why would anyone need more than 2 knobs right?? (Get your head out of the gutter woman! (Then 3 is the more accurate number right ;))*Steps out of the gutter herself :)* Anyway, loved it!
I am really sorry for not commenting earlier on this great Danish story. Am glad to see that Al and Dana get to know each other better. They seem to establish their relationship by sharing their past and their future plans with each other. But Alice being a nurse? I’m pretty sceptical there, lol. Also like the fact that Shane and Alice have such a strong bond and that Shane got to meet Dana. She’s like Alice’s big sister and looking out for her. That’s so damn cute. It definitely makes it easier that Shane approves of Dana. Way to go Dane, lol. Danish all the way through:-))) Keep up the good work, MaGoose! I’ll be here to read your next chapter…
Hiya MaG! I have to tell ya that Alice is so cute making sure she is taking care of Dana. I was laughing at how she explained the shower knobs! LMAO! Even funnier, was Dana just walking out of said shower without bothering to figure out how to turn it off!! ROFLMAO! I want you to know, that there is a find young lady and author, who is in Ecuador at this time, and not able to access the site. She requested that a mutual friend send copies of my story (why I have no clue), but when we spoke, I asked “Is there any other writer on the site you would like me to copy their stories in an email to you so you won’t fall too far behind over the month. She said, yes…MaGoose. So there you have it! You are being read in Ecuador, while this young nursing student tries to help the less fortunate. So…not pressure or anything Ma, BUT….you are part of her quiet moments….so…guess you’ll have to be sure to post FREQUENTLY! ;- )
fricking grade A chap…love reading the little bits of backstory, Al and Shane mustsa been cute as hell…the shower, well I am still chucking!
Thank you so very much for another great update to this story, don’t worry about not writing faster, and I stand bye it about wine………
Hey, firstly sorry i didnt comment ur last chapter just caught up been off fan fic for a while im just so busy lately, hench my story not bein posted lol. Secondly LOVED this chapter and last chapter. They are becoming so close in sucha cute way obviously circumstances are good but still. And agen u done it in such a real believable way. I cant wait for ur next post and see how things progress between the two new lovers or soon to be im hoping :) PPS love ur story. x x
I am so glad… I actually felt close to Alice, as Alice was talking….. :)Go get a room, get married!
Glad u posted,was checking.I am glad Al and Dana are getting closer,sucks it was from the beating(sigh) I totally enjoy reading ur stories MG and the way u write is soooo awesome,THANKS!!!Great job as always!!!! PPS
I love this story great update and I can’t wait to see what will happen next pps as I love this alice and dana story so much I hope to see a wedding and a few children I hope
“snobs”? lol. I meant knobs. Pardon my typing.
And so sorry for the triple posts. I am getting delirious.
Oh! And hail_danalice, you’re not the only one who’s getting delirious, my dear. Join the club, we give out toasters upon membership. lol
Dammit, not first this time. Drat. Oh wells, I’m not on the ball. My apologies. I really liked this one! But I always love it when people are able to talk to each other, and it seems like these two are able to do that easily. Alice is a big piece of adorkable with her mumblings about labeling the shower knobs. That’s totally something I would do if I were a billionaire and had a complicated shower. She’s gonna have to laminate the labels though, or they’ll get all soaked and unreadable. Why am I analyzing the labels so much?? Who knows. Anyway, I love this and I think you’re the bee’s knees. I should really shut up now, I’m totally babbling like I’m high. I’m not, I swear. I’m just sleep deprived and hyper. Heart you!
My pleasure *bow* lol aaAaaAawww this just melted my heart. I absolutely LOVE it!! and Lloooo0oooovvee heehee And yes, I’d appreciate Dr. Pieszecki… with my Dana clones of course, I wouldn’t wanna steal da real Dane from Alice. lol Thanks sweety xx
“Senorita MaGoose, International Writer of Danish Fictions. My Danish Fictions weekly show. You’re my special A & D storyteller.” (borrowed it from D). Congratulations, you are wanted internationally and are as popular as Chicki. That is so awesome. Salute!!! Love the shower snobs scene. LMAO like everyone else. I love how attentive A was with D. It was great that they were able to talked about themselves and getting to know each other better without all the drama. The reason behind A wanting to be a nurse was touching. Still loving this story and many thanks to you, MaGoose.
Hello MG… the way you imbue your words with emotions… and tension… is incredible… you include so much detail into the souls of these two woman and it can only create a bond between the readers and the characters and that is a rare gift amongst writers… bravo… hmmmmm… other then that all I have is you are completely brilliant… and wow… yeah I think I might try my hand at a small danish piece soon enough… hugs, JC