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The Island – Chapter 9
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"Tell you what? How about you don’t worry about it when we are alone, OK? I promise not to report you."
"If that is what you want. No problem, Miss."
Alice turned around so her back was once again to Dana and gave a little smile. It wasn’t going to be easy to break through all the barriers Dana has set up, but, it was going to be fun.
"The locker room is over there, if you want to get changed." Alice said as she pointed to a door off in the corner.
"Right!" Dana said as she jogged quickly over to the door and went inside. It had to be the nicest locker room she had ever seen. It seemed more like a fancy private bathroom. There were several comfortable benches to sit on, two enclosed shower stalls, and some open-faced lockers. Dana headed over to one and quickly changed into her workout clothes. She left her other clothes in one of the lockers. Only one other had anything in it — apparently Alice’s clothes. Dana was drawn over to that locker. The clothes were carefully folded and put inside — nothing haphazard about how the locker was set up. Dana was a bit surprised. She thought that someone with as much money as Alice wouldn’t care about such things. She realized there was more to the other woman than met the eye.
Dana picked up Alice’s shirt. It was a plain cotton t-shirt in light blue. It was very similar to something Dana herself might wear. The shirt was still slightly warm. Alice must have only recently taken it off. Dana could smell the unique scent of Alice very lightly on the fabric.
Dana finally regained her senses and realized she was sniffing her boss’s shirt while said boss was just outside the door. She hoped she hadn’t wasted too much time in her daydreams. She quickly grabbed her duffle with her pads in it and headed back to the main room.
Alice was still there, but, she had since gotten pads on herself. She couldn’t be serious, could she? Did she expect to spar with Dana? Dana looked around the large room again and there was no one else there.
"Get suited up, Fairbanks! We don’t have all day."
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Alice Shuffling! So… fucking cute. I was smiling like cheshire cat all the way. I’m glad how both of them came to their senses. Too huried will be poisonous ;) Awww so they kissed and little bit of spreading legs haha. (Man,I sound like a pervert) Harrison cracked me up too. Very cute, priceless~ Martial Art Alice… Actually ya know what? Leisha said she is very athletic, so I can imagine her sparring with Dana. ‘Twas very hot. Can’t believe Dana pass the shower with her, good self-control, Dana!!! Teehee…. It just made my day. Plz post soon. love it!!
Hello Ma… ok let me start off by saying that was freaking awesome… the way you have each segment leading into something more and more intimate is just so powerful… very slow burn for these woman and that is going to catch up with them… hmmmmm… I’m still wondering what this company is all about… when ever I read about Harrison being overly protective of Alice I think she’s some kind of royalty or something… hmmmmm… maybe I just missed something early on and well I so do love to go back and re-read… hehe… but yeah this was just awesome… the whole training thing is just powerful and the details you put into their emotions as it connects with the environment is awesome… keep kicking super duper @$$. hugs, JC
One more note… hmmmmm… can we have a poker night or something… it might be interesting to see this crew in a different light… and well that competitive streak between Al and Dana and well Gabby and Nadia would be interesting :P… JC
I’m so excited!! They kissed! So, Dana will be Alice’s regular working out partner huh? *nudge, nudge, wink, wink*
AHHH one more thought perhaps on what JC said…poker night = strip poker :D LoL *HUGZ* love it Goose!
Hey :) Reli sorry i didnt comment ur last chapter im burning myself out with work and assignments and i havent even wrote my next chapter yet :S sorry for tht too lol. I loved every second of this chapter it just felt so real. I could imagine the whole thing as part of an episode, it was so Al and Dane lol. Your writing seems to get better with every chapter it reli does :).Oh and no u cant get awy with cliffhangers lol even after writing too great chapters lol. :) xx PPS xx
Wooohooooo the first kiss,I freaking LOVE this story!!! That damn Chimes,and Dana’s will power not to shower with Alice (I think I couldnt pass up that chance in a million years to see Leisha in a shower GOOD LORD) U made my day thanks MG U totally rock!! HDD all the way baby!!! PPS
My conclusion is “a match made in heaven.” I cannot believe that A was just as good a fighter as D. What a great surprise! It was very smart of Stranton to have A learnt self defense. You just never know. MaGoose, you did an excellent job on their sparring. D thought that she would beat A, staring at “the ass”, smelling A’s shirt.. totally love their interactions and of course their first kiss. And Harrison too. With all these great comments above, I am just be repetitive. But I have to agree with ILUVLEISHA and protest about the chime too. Was it really necessary? maybe A really had a tight schedule to run her empire. Looking forward to more of this awesome story. Thank you.
aww, yay! I know I’m late and anything worthwhile has already been said, but I absolutely heart this. This comment is nowhere near constructive. At all. I blame my complete and utter exhaustion, lol. Go you! *hugs for Goose*
Damn and I thought it was hot with just the sparring..(ala Buffy/Faith)hehe Harrison is just like us, your devoted readers but without the fingers blocking :D
Yeah there were a lot of updates for me to get caught up on. Man I need to find an Island like this and figure out how to infiltrate it. This story is amazing. I love your writing. Sorry to hear you like GT. I played at Kansas so I have to be a die hard loyalist…
Comme on, you can’t do this… first the chime goes off (I don’t uderstand how can a meeting be more important than kissing Dana, lol), then Dana refuses shower with Alice…I expect you to fully make up for this, eventually :)Harrison was cool covering his eyes, but I hope they’ll have more privacy next time. This was simply wonderful! PPVS!
Sweet heaven – a great update MaGoose – but you shouldn’t have left it there – more please.
Hahhahaha loved Harrison peeking through his fingers. Great update again MaGoose. Can’t wait to see where the next work-out leads to. PPS ;)
aw…. sweet!! weeeeeeeehhh after a bad day this just lifted me up like that! Thank you. Me loves… and I can handle Gabby.. only for a bit more, I know Fairbanks would be abe to kick her a.s hehe Thanks again. :)
SWEETNESS! OK, now that that’s out of the way…. soooo i read this and then had to run an errand! Look how many are before me, they love you Goose, just like i do. Harrison had me cracking up-looking at the scene through the slits in his fingers! LMFAO good times. Excellent job, cant wait to see them wrestle or spar or whatever in bed ,Lol jk You’re doing a great job! Thanks so much for this much needed update, i didnt think i could stand to be with myself in a room much longer without reading something new from The Island! Outstanding!
…Oh man. This was so awesome! I fucking love this story. You’re doing a fantastic job, girl! I was laughing pretty hard at the part with the mouth guards tho…only Alice and Dana, in the world of fanfic, could pull off a make out session immediately after removing their mouth guards. In real life, that would have most likely been a slobbery disaster. lol. But itnstead, we get adorable, hot hot hot, Danish lovin :-D I can’t wait for the next! PPS!!!
Wow, this was some update! There are many great things to comment on (and have already been commented on). Dana, Alice, and Harrison were too cute for words. My heart goes out to Dana. She seems so insecure… again thinking she was going to get kicked off the island. I think Alice has a lot a walls to break down if she really wants to be with Dana.
Grins**Loves me the idea of martial arts Alice. Harrison funnier then hell with the peaking through his fingers like a little kid.
so cute. i love it.