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The Journey 19
Bette – I promised myself when I returned to LA I would not spend as much time as work as what I did when I was working for CAC. It is impossible for me not to spend a reasonable amount of time at work, it is just ingrained in my personality but I have made it my practice to go in early and leave no later than 7pm. On the nights when I am supposed to have
Bette : “Hey Tina”
Tina : “Hi Bette”
Bette : “Everything OK, shouldn’t you be on your way to the house ?”
Tina : “I am kinda stuck at work for a bit.”
Bette : my heart begins to sink, I have gotten quite used to seeing Tina regularly and spending time with
Tina : “So I was wondering maybe if you wanted, you could pick
Bette : I looked up at the sky, blue, blue. “Why not, give me time to go home and get changed and we’ll be by in an hour or so. I’m in the car now.”
Tina : In the car now. I wonder, since when does Bette leave work at
Bette : “No problem, I think it’s a great idea. I bought choco, I hope that’s OK” choco barked when I said his name. Tina turns around to see
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(62 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
Love this story please post soon
oh god, i simply LOVE this story . at points in the dialogue i hold my breath … i know it’s only fiction . but it truly makes me smile and sometimes makes me want to cry … so looking forward to the next chapter …
Love that they’re finding their way through the mess they had made. Please keep the communication open and honest. Post soon, too, please.
Good chapter. This is hard but they will work through it!
This is such a good story, thanks for writing again. Your dialogue is great.
Yes, this is a great story. Please post again really soon. I love it.
Hey where did you been I missed you’re Story Thanks for posted I Love it I’m still waiting I hope you continue soon Thanks!
Hey, hey!!!! I’m so glad you posted…this story is one of my favorites on this site!!! Felt like I was right there listening in on their conversation, the writing is so real and descriptive. Thanks!
“Tina : “Agreed.” and I smile at Bette. Aware this conversation could have gone a lot worse.”
Your Tina is very smart to give this(still temperamental) Bette more time to vent. You’ve given Tina an admirable sense of restraint; she didn’t give in to the temptation to immediately point out all the bad/sad things she’d endured alone when Bette fled to NY.
You’ve given us hope that these two will finally learn to really listen to each other.
Please don’t wait so long for another chapter!!!
Thank you for the great chapter. can’t wait for more
what a joy to wake up to this great story. love your dialogue. their internal conflicts. trying ever so hard to stay on task. can feel the love and nerveousness between them.
“July 25th 2004. her last name is porter-kennard. she took her first steps on june 4th this year, in our home bette.” ahhhh. thanks, glad your thesis went/is going well. post soon.
Love this Nette did miss a lot, It up to her to make up for lost time.. thanks
Happy to see your back, great story keep them coming. ;)
im with B&TForever..they have to talk.. talk and if is not enough they have to talk even more…they belong together i hope they find their way back together soon..thanks for post hope your Thesis is going well thanks :o)