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    The Journey 37

    Story written on December 13, 2005 by unbeknown.
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    Bette thinks about what just happened.
    Bette: “What was that?”

    Tina: I am relieved that Bette has rolled over and made eye contact. She watches me intensely. “Baby?” and I reach out to touch her face.

    Bette: I sit up and wait for Tina to join me, we sit face to face. I see the shadows of the flames on the side of her face. I watch Tina. I see she is concerned and confused.

    Tina: “Bette, will you tell me why you are upset?” I ask her gently.

    Bette: I glare at Tina. “What was that?” I say with a hint of anger in my voice.

    Tina: “I don’t. I’m not sure I understand what you are asking me baby.”

    Bette: And I stand up and go to the window I stare out, into darkness. Tina quickly follows me.

    Tina: “Bette, please talk to me.”

    Bette: I swallow. I am passionate when I speak. “Tina, I waited and waited for this moment” and I turn around “I prayed for this moment, I begged, I pleaded with God, I would give him everything, if he would give me a second chance with you. To turn back time so things would be different.  And here we are, together.” And I shake my head “but this is not what I, how I thought it would be.”

    Tina: “OK. No. Not OK, Bette, I have no idea what you mean, to me it’s perfect, you are perfect.” I nod to encourage Bette, not sure where Bette is going with this and she no longer seems sad or angry.

    Bette: I have turned to face Tina, my arms are crossed and I approach her “Do you love me Tina?” My tone demands an answer.

    Tina: “Bette, oh my God, yes, I love you, why would ask that after all we’ve been through and now we are here together. I wouldn’t be here if I didn’t love you” and I reach out to rub Bette on the arm but she walks away from me thinking.

    Bette: “Then what was that?”

    Tina: I look down, I know what Bette is referring to. “What was what about?”

    Bette: I give an ironic laugh at how some things never change, Tina always looked down when she wasn’t telling me the whole truth. “You never could bullshit me Tina.”

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    7. I’m agreeing with Lauren25, don’t you ever scare me like that again and get on with the new found happiness, they deserve it! great update! post soon please!

    8. Thank you for that chapter because I was thinking what Bette was thinking and not really liking it much…I’m also glad that it god resolved as it did as it could have been another blowup…

    10. I have followed your story along theway and until now have been a silent reader. Anyway, just wanted to weigh in on this. I definately don’t like Tina’s explanation. Forgiveness is a beautiful thing and revenge is something different. If Tina has not truly forgiven Bette for her indiscretion then they should not travel this road. If she has forgiven Bette then their would be no need for revenge. I think Bette should have not conceded quite so easily and could have probed further to better determine their current state and whether or not she has truly been forgiven.

    11. well, that was close…i did understand tina’s explanation and even though bette might concider to ask more questions, i think tina truly loves her and next time it will be love making that they both crave

    17. Great post. They both needed to exercise that demon…but they need to remember their renewed marriage is based on equality not domination. Please post soon.

    19. wow that was intense… great job… i can see Bette’s anger and doubts… wait to see if Tina really forgave Bette (now I’m not so sure) and if Bette fully accepted Tina’s explanation (I did)… thanks

    20. Unbeknown…Great writing. So intense. I love your ability to really give detail to the story and their thoughts but the last 2-3 paragraphs confused me. I understood that Tina was showing Bette that she was going to an equal partner to Bette in every way, in this case, the bedroom. However, why did Bette apologize to Tina, when Tina really tried to sexually subjugate Bette with the use of handcuffs, etc. ? help me out here. After all, Bette said she understood equality not ownership. Thx.

    22. I totally agree with honda90….”because I was thinking what Bette was thinking and not really liking it much”. I’m so glad to see the way this chapter ended and please continue…

    23. Bette really did need to say that, the situation can’t be changed by having Tina trying to dominate Bette so she feels secure. I had a feeling Bette wouldn’t like it very much but now I think they should just move on together as equals.

    24. at the beginning of this chapter u described what Bette used to do to Tina to claim ownership so as the song says “I learnt from the best”; and T took control and really Imo Bette got angry after the fact because she fears losing control,so yes she should apologies for all the times she made T submit which you describe 2 of and allude to more…because that submission carried on out of the bedroom and filled the parameters of their relationship until T lost her identity…T is saying I want u Bette but as equals…I will not submit again unless you do…I thought this was one of the best B & T chapters I have ever read…it truly defines their new relationship, T is no longer Bette’s bumboy to put it bluntly…and I think she well and truly learnt her lesson about how that feels to be dominated, great stuff

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