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The Journey 46
Bette: I get into bed and snuggle up behind Tina wrapping both arms around her. I start to kiss the back of her neck as I gently push her hair up. I reach around and touch her right breast. In a second Tina has turned to face me and although it is dark I can her facial expression.
Tina: “You are fucking kidding, aren’t you Bette?” I give her my best ‘don’t you dare voice.’
Bette: “Anything but” I hold firm and I hold Tina’s glare. Over her shoulder through the blinds I see dim light shining, probably from the street lights. Tina glares at me. “What’s the problem?” I enquire. “This is what couples do, fuck.we could try it.” Sarcasm at a premium.
Tina: “What’s the problem?” I raise my voice and it is more of a statement than a question. I turn over and pull the quilt up to my neck.
Bette: Undeterred I spoon Tina, pushing myself into her so that there is no mistake about my intentions. “What is the problem?” I whisper, determined to get an answer. “tell me, as I touch her breast more firmly and start to make my way down with my hand. I start to touch Tina and she squirms. “Don’t you like that, you used to like it a lot” I say with no attempt to hide what I know or feel.
Tina: “Bette, fuck off.”
Bette: “I’d like too, I’m trying to.” I say without a hint of humour, the smallest amount of meanness sneaking into my voice. I stroke Tina’s clit. “Don’t you like it?” I whisper in her ear.
Tina: “Go to sleep Bette.” And I push her hand away.
Bette: I think for 20 seconds or so about Tina’s response. “Tina, why do we not make love anymore?”
Tina: I’ve had enough, I turn over majorly pissed off. “Perhaps Bette because you turn up four hours late, three quarters pissed.”
Bette: “Oh, I see.” As the sarcastic ness creeps in. “And how many times has that happened in the last 6 months?” I am not going away and Tina best get that now.
Tina: “What’s you point?”
Bette: “That we never make love. At least not in the last month” And my voice has a hard edge to it.
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(41 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
wow, what a drama…can’t wait to see bette’s responce and i also want happy B&T…what the f*** is wrong with tina, i keep asking myself….when you have a woman like bette with you, why do you need to look anywhere else? post soon
OMG you are so mean unbeknown!!!! Why can’t they just be happy???
Wow great chapter please post soon
Outstanding. I loved the first page where Bette spoke so frankly and acted forcefully with Tina. God, how I wish she would be so direct on the show. Get Tina to admit and face her actions.
Never anticipated you going in this direction with your story – but since you´ve headed down that road, I hope Bette tells Tina to call Alice and have her come hold her hand – there´s no happiness down this road and Bette should save herself from more heartache
Bette is the good one here and she’ll get Tina through the delivery. I’m not sure she’ll be able to enjoy the baby though. She understands Tina could just take them away at any moment and just might do that. God Bette wanted commitment rings and Tinas wants a cyber cock and not even touching from her partner.
Bette will take Tina to the hospital and take care of Laurel, but I don’t think she’ll fully enjoy the birth of the baby. She doesn’t know where she fits in with Tina anymore. Her family has been disrupted and now it’s like a stranger… Thanks for the twists and drama, please continue.
te will do the right thing, be there for the birth of the baby and will take care of Laurel. Will she ever be close to Tina and the children as she wanted to be.to be a Mom to both of the kids or will the though always be she can take the from her thanks
I’m just catching up reading Whoa! great!!
Shit this is sad and drama keep coming, now the baby coming, and hope they will talk more about this. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow – this is all kinds of messed up but I ‘ m ready to see where you take these two.
Love this take on Bette and Tina. You know that Bette will at least get Tina to the hospital, but she may not go with her. But the true Bette will suck it up and go to the hospital with her. She may even be in the delivery room and see the new baby. I do hope that Tina will realize that Bette is the only person for her.
Of course Bette is going to do the right thing.
Wonder what Bette is going to do, as she is so upset with what is going on, or does she even care anymore. Can’t wait to see what happens. But I would love a happy ending between Bette and Tina. Post real soon.
Yeah, just a little drama there. Don’t think Tina’s going to be able to play the “my water just broke” card too often, but I have to admit it’s a good one, trumps all kinds of stuff. With complication on top of complication these two are going to have a real Gordian knot to deal with. I’ll be watching to see how you unravel it.
Yikes, angsty but good. It will interesting to see how Bette copes with her hurt and anger as well as happiness with the baby.
yey.. cuz babies fix everything in fan fiction :)
Great chapter. Please post soon.
The best so far…great chapter…pls post soon…
How many of you want to just reach and grab the TV Tina? Make this version a bad dream…
Please, let this all be a bad dream. Does Bette might need to inquire where Tina got this baby? This is messed up!
Unbeknown,I have just caught up with the last two chapters and have been having palpitations ever since. I did feel that there was an unnecessary jump in time after the lovingly long way back for Bette and Tina. But, gal, you have really piled on the drama since. Bette and Tina need to clear the air and be honest and sober in their assessment of their relationship; now and for the future. Please make it so and have these wonderful women reunited again. They belong together and need to get by these traumatic times. It is a testament to your talent how realistic and honest this portrayal is. Thank you for this new twist. Your Loyal Fan.