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The Journey 46
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Tina: “I’m going to sleep.” And I turn over and look out through the blinds, my back to Bette.
Bette: I sigh. No answers. I make a snap decision. In an instant I am out of the bed and rip the quilt from the bed, leaving Tina exposed. I turn the light on. “No. I want answers Tina.”
Tina: “Bette, you are pissed and making things much worse.” As I roll over and reach down for the quilt.
Bette: “I want an answer Tee.”
Tina: “Well, Bette I say getting out of the bed and putting on a dressing gown. “Perhaps it is that I am nearly nine months pregnant, work part time and have a small child to look after.”
Bette: “Oh, you have a small child to look after.”
Tina: “Yes, I do.” And Bette is still naked in front of me, now with her hands on her hips.
Bette: “That child, your child, Tina is asleep now.” And I turn my palms up at my sides as though there is no other explanation in the world as to why we cannot make love.
Tina: “Is this about Helena?”
Bette: And I let out a little laugh. “That, I can honestly say no to. Not Helena.” And I make my way to get a beer from the kitchen fridge, conceding that I will not get any honest answers tonight.
Tina: “Where are you going?” as I see Bette make her way out of the room.
Bette: Naked I stalk out to the fridge and grab a beer. I head outside to sit by the pool. I pop the beer and take a swig. “Helena, if only.” I say out loud.
Tina: I hear Bette pop the lid off a beer and the door close behind her. I assume she is sitting out by the pool as Bette sometimes does. The beer. I start to think, the beer, it begins to dawn on me. The beer was by the computer. No. If Bette knew something, she’d say. Could she know?
Bette: I hear Tina get up and head to the study. “How fucking predictable.” I say out loud and take another swig of the beer. “Fucking, being the operative word.” I wait.
Tina: I log on and wait, I sip my water. True to form, he logs on. I message. “Hey there.”
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wow, what a drama…can’t wait to see bette’s responce and i also want happy B&T…what the f*** is wrong with tina, i keep asking myself….when you have a woman like bette with you, why do you need to look anywhere else? post soon
OMG you are so mean unbeknown!!!! Why can’t they just be happy???
Wow great chapter please post soon
Outstanding. I loved the first page where Bette spoke so frankly and acted forcefully with Tina. God, how I wish she would be so direct on the show. Get Tina to admit and face her actions.
Never anticipated you going in this direction with your story – but since you´ve headed down that road, I hope Bette tells Tina to call Alice and have her come hold her hand – there´s no happiness down this road and Bette should save herself from more heartache
Bette is the good one here and she’ll get Tina through the delivery. I’m not sure she’ll be able to enjoy the baby though. She understands Tina could just take them away at any moment and just might do that. God Bette wanted commitment rings and Tinas wants a cyber cock and not even touching from her partner.
Bette will take Tina to the hospital and take care of Laurel, but I don’t think she’ll fully enjoy the birth of the baby. She doesn’t know where she fits in with Tina anymore. Her family has been disrupted and now it’s like a stranger… Thanks for the twists and drama, please continue.
te will do the right thing, be there for the birth of the baby and will take care of Laurel. Will she ever be close to Tina and the children as she wanted to be.to be a Mom to both of the kids or will the though always be she can take the from her thanks
I’m just catching up reading Whoa! great!!
Shit this is sad and drama keep coming, now the baby coming, and hope they will talk more about this. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow – this is all kinds of messed up but I ‘ m ready to see where you take these two.
Love this take on Bette and Tina. You know that Bette will at least get Tina to the hospital, but she may not go with her. But the true Bette will suck it up and go to the hospital with her. She may even be in the delivery room and see the new baby. I do hope that Tina will realize that Bette is the only person for her.
Of course Bette is going to do the right thing.
Wonder what Bette is going to do, as she is so upset with what is going on, or does she even care anymore. Can’t wait to see what happens. But I would love a happy ending between Bette and Tina. Post real soon.
Yeah, just a little drama there. Don’t think Tina’s going to be able to play the “my water just broke” card too often, but I have to admit it’s a good one, trumps all kinds of stuff. With complication on top of complication these two are going to have a real Gordian knot to deal with. I’ll be watching to see how you unravel it.
Yikes, angsty but good. It will interesting to see how Bette copes with her hurt and anger as well as happiness with the baby.
yey.. cuz babies fix everything in fan fiction :)
Great chapter. Please post soon.
The best so far…great chapter…pls post soon…
How many of you want to just reach and grab the TV Tina? Make this version a bad dream…
Please, let this all be a bad dream. Does Bette might need to inquire where Tina got this baby? This is messed up!
Unbeknown,I have just caught up with the last two chapters and have been having palpitations ever since. I did feel that there was an unnecessary jump in time after the lovingly long way back for Bette and Tina. But, gal, you have really piled on the drama since. Bette and Tina need to clear the air and be honest and sober in their assessment of their relationship; now and for the future. Please make it so and have these wonderful women reunited again. They belong together and need to get by these traumatic times. It is a testament to your talent how realistic and honest this portrayal is. Thank you for this new twist. Your Loyal Fan.