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The Journey 5
I begin to realize I have a million questions, for a start, who the ***** is Sam and what the ***** is doing with my daughter and my wife ? I know Tina used Marcus’s sperm, I can see it in the little girl, and what is my daughter’s name and why didn’t Tina tell me ? I storm into the house, don’t bother to put keys down. I pick up the phone.
Bette : “Kit, how could you ?” I scream down the phone as though the whole disaster known as my life is her fault. I throw the phone down and wait for Kit to arrive. That is all I had to say, Kit knew exactly what I was talking about, they have just all been waiting for me to find out. While I wait, I make one more phone call, to my lawyer and tell her I want to see my daughter regularly, I don’t care how she does it, what it costs, don’t bother me with it, just make it happen and soon.
I hear Kit pull up, she has Shane with her, she will need her help I tell myself.
Bette : “Shane you too, how could you ?” I say accusingly. I didn’t wait for them to get inside I have made my way to Kit’s car. They are getting out. Pointing and yelling.
Kit : “take it easy baby sis, no one tried.” Kit indicates calm with her arms.
Bette : “Take it easy, Kit I have a ***** child and no one told me, take it easy my *****” My hands are on my hips, the with one hand I rub my brow.
Kit : “No one knew how to tell you, we all thought Tina, should and would tell you”
Bette : “Really ? I raise both eyebrows “How about Bette, your wife is pregnant and you are planning a trip and not planning on being home anytime soon. How about Bette you have a daughter. Is that so ***** hard ?” I say sarcastically. “I can work it out Kit, you all knew she was pregnant didn’t you ?”
Shane : “Bette, come on, let’s go inside and talk this through, right. Nothing has happened that we can’t fix here”
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(62 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
This is great! You’re doing just fine. Keep the excitement going. Please calm Bette down, otherwise, they’ll just be all defensive, and not talk about their true feelings for one another. That’s cute, that Laurel took to Bette like that.
omg love it..going to next chapter
I don’t know why you need ideas from us. I think you are doing great on your own!!! Thanks!
Hoping you’re writing the next part right now, really enjoying the story!!
Wow, everyone turned on Bette. To keep this from her for 18 months.. Kit pretty easily gave up Tina’s info to Bette why didn’t she ride Tina to tell Bette, did Tina threaten to keep Laurel from her auntie if she told Bette? I would’ve called my attorney too, not sure who to trust anymore as no one seemed to have her back on this; Bette could simply believe that Tina isn’t going to let her have any parental rights, so legal may be her only option; just think if Bette hadn’t come back to LA ever, would Tina have ever reached out to her and told her, maybe when she needed tuition money ah Bette the provider; Tina could have gone into the house and faced Bette on Sunday, but she ran away as she did for 18 months; Being angry with Bette for her infidelity is understandable, but now you’re a parent, grow up and think of you child first…hmm can you tell whose side I”m on here…things should have never gotten to this point…it’ll be interesting to see Tina experience the wrath of Bette as Tina can be viewed as hurting a member of Bette’s family…I’m still of softy and want to seem them reconcile but Tina has some serious ‘splaining to do!
I don’t think you need any ideas from
us. your doing a great job on your own. :)
Let Bette try to get over her angry and Tins will talk to her. Hell Betty is the one that when off , to see the world. and messed up by cheating. In 18 months someone should have told Bette, You are doing great on this. Bette shouldn’t have call her lawyer. Fast on the draw Porter. thanks
i hope also that your writing the next chappy right now. poor bette. poor tina. shouldnt have called the attorney. that always makes things worse. communication. dont need ideas from me, but ill think about it. geez that just woke me up from reading jks. and i was in such a good mood. need to go back and read it.
you don’t need ideas from us! you’re doing a great job! although maybe if Bette has so many questions she can listen to what Tina has to say! just a suggestion! but keep it going, I love it!
I just got caught up with this story!!!
I love it and I hope you keep writing. I like the baby’s name too….Thanks
omg amazzzzzing!!! i love this story its so sad but yeah like happy to not jumopp for joy happy but hopeful happy!! i cant wait for the next post pleeeaaase upload soon thanx byeness<3387589734789
Whoa, well written. Seems as though you have Bette pegged. Keep it coming!
Damn love it love it!!!!