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The Journey 5
I pour a glass of scotch and walk out the back. Suddenly I feel more alone than I ever have, more betrayed and hurt. Being home is harder than I thought. I missed so much. I feel like all the progress I made and the strength I gathered just disappeared. I sit on the chair outside, sip my drink. I don’t drink to get drunk but to take the sting out of it a little. I think about all the things Tina and I did to each other, how could she, why would she do this to me, does she want to punish me that much, she should have the house or at least live in it, what about Sam, who is she and what role does she have in Tina’s life and why didn’t Tina never tell her about me. It was obvious she didn’t know who I was, no one would have said what she did if they had known who I was.
Bette : I feed the dog, say goodnight, climb in the bed and hope I will sleep through the night. I just cannot deal with it today.
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(62 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
This is great! You’re doing just fine. Keep the excitement going. Please calm Bette down, otherwise, they’ll just be all defensive, and not talk about their true feelings for one another. That’s cute, that Laurel took to Bette like that.
omg love it..going to next chapter
I don’t know why you need ideas from us. I think you are doing great on your own!!! Thanks!
Hoping you’re writing the next part right now, really enjoying the story!!
Wow, everyone turned on Bette. To keep this from her for 18 months.. Kit pretty easily gave up Tina’s info to Bette why didn’t she ride Tina to tell Bette, did Tina threaten to keep Laurel from her auntie if she told Bette? I would’ve called my attorney too, not sure who to trust anymore as no one seemed to have her back on this; Bette could simply believe that Tina isn’t going to let her have any parental rights, so legal may be her only option; just think if Bette hadn’t come back to LA ever, would Tina have ever reached out to her and told her, maybe when she needed tuition money ah Bette the provider; Tina could have gone into the house and faced Bette on Sunday, but she ran away as she did for 18 months; Being angry with Bette for her infidelity is understandable, but now you’re a parent, grow up and think of you child first…hmm can you tell whose side I”m on here…things should have never gotten to this point…it’ll be interesting to see Tina experience the wrath of Bette as Tina can be viewed as hurting a member of Bette’s family…I’m still of softy and want to seem them reconcile but Tina has some serious ‘splaining to do!
I don’t think you need any ideas from
us. your doing a great job on your own. :)
Let Bette try to get over her angry and Tins will talk to her. Hell Betty is the one that when off , to see the world. and messed up by cheating. In 18 months someone should have told Bette, You are doing great on this. Bette shouldn’t have call her lawyer. Fast on the draw Porter. thanks
i hope also that your writing the next chappy right now. poor bette. poor tina. shouldnt have called the attorney. that always makes things worse. communication. dont need ideas from me, but ill think about it. geez that just woke me up from reading jks. and i was in such a good mood. need to go back and read it.
you don’t need ideas from us! you’re doing a great job! although maybe if Bette has so many questions she can listen to what Tina has to say! just a suggestion! but keep it going, I love it!
I just got caught up with this story!!!
I love it and I hope you keep writing. I like the baby’s name too….Thanks
omg amazzzzzing!!! i love this story its so sad but yeah like happy to not jumopp for joy happy but hopeful happy!! i cant wait for the next post pleeeaaase upload soon thanx byeness<3387589734789
Whoa, well written. Seems as though you have Bette pegged. Keep it coming!
Damn love it love it!!!!