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20 minutes later Janice is sitting out the back with me, scotch on the rocks.
Janice: “Tonight is the first time I have seen your house.”
Bette: The scotches are starting to take effect. “I suppose that’s true.” I nod my head as I speak and I think back to the time Janice and I spent in
Janice: “No.” I answer truthfully but it does not answer the question Bette was really asking.
Bette: I nod, not sure what to make of that answer. How about a swim?” Janice: “Hmmm, you first.” I say playfully.
Bette: I stand up and pull my tee shirt over my head and easily slip my jeans off and wade into the pool. I spread my arms out and then turn around. “Are you coming?”
Janice: “You are drunk Bette.” Bette: “Almost” say and grin, not the least bit bothered by the fact that I am almost drunk or naked.
Janice: I get in the pool but keep my undies and tee-shirt on. Bette leans her elbows against the edge of the pool.
Bette: “I don’t remember you being shy.” My tone inviting and mischievous.
Janice: I give a little laugh “That is because I’m not shy, you know that” I take a sip of my scotch and place it on the side of the pool. “Why did you ask me here Bette?” I say seriously and hold her gaze.
Bette: “Why did you turn me down when I offered to sleep with you?”
Janice: I smile at the memory. Bette was so shocked when I said no. “You know the answer to that, you were in love with Tina. That’s all it was Bette, an offer, you felt you owed it to me.”
Bette: “I wanted to sleep with you.” And this time I hold her gaze letting her know I am a match for her.
Janice: I start to make my way out of the pool. “I’m not doing this” I say with my back to Bette.
Bette: I reach out and take hold Janice’s hand. “Janice, wait.”
Janice: “For what?” and I turn around as I say it.
Bette: “Why are you here if you don’t find me attractive?”
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so screwed up, both of them…i leave it up to to make it right…and by that i mean B&T together of course LOL
I think Tina’s the wrong party, maybe she should open up first. If Tina didn’t have an affair, Bette wouldn’t make a move on Janice. I think she just wants Tina to care, to hurt. BTW, Janice is a great and wise woman. She turned Bette down twice, which is not easy to anybody.
tks for the update…but pls not long enough for even an appetizer!! pls post soon….This is a good story!!!
Bette already answered that question. Tina owes the answer here. Bette said she wanted her family, Tina said I don’t know, so Tina WHAT DO YOU WANT?!
I think its important for Tina to know how Bette found out, while searching the net for commitment rings. Tina also has to be honest about her disgust with Bette wanting sex with her, yet she’d leave Bette in bed to screw a guy online. I’m not sure Tina really gets how messed up things really are for Bette who not only could lose Tina, but the girls, in an “embarassing” way.
thanks for the update…looking forward to the next post!
Much prefer your story to S3! Thanks for writing.
unbeknown..I hope you get these two fucked up women straightened out. thanks for the great chapter
Unbeknown, thank you for the update, even if I think it’s a little cruel to end the chapter like this, allez, you probably forgot to post page 3, 4, 5, 6…and you’re gonna post them today :-) Did I mention lately j’adore cette version de B&T.
UnB, Oh my god, what a twist tale this has become. Thankfully Bette and Tina are talking and therefore I see some hope for the future. You often never know what you have until you almost lose it so please have Bette admit that she needs Tina. Bette needs to open up and be honest with Tina. Tina must listen to Bette and try to find the common ground to rebuild their union. Thank you for these wonderful words and storytelling. Your Loyal Fan.
what is happening to our couple(B/T)?please give us some hope there .read you tomorrow?
Great job. I am taken by the words we sometimes use and how they can haunt us. It seems that Bette may be haunted by her same words. How easy it is to throw them out when we don’t always understand their meanings. Thanks Unb for another great chapter
Cliff hangers are not fun! I think they both need to go out, have an affair and then go home to one another, compare notes and see what they really want. I wouldn’t do that, but at least they would have their answers! These two are seriously irking me off.Post soon.
Great update Unbeknown. If you don’t post more often I don’t think I’ll make it through S3. Umm, memo to Tina: It’s not enough to imply that you care because you say that you want to make it work. You should actually tell Bette that you care, you love her, you’re sorry, and you miss her. *Sigh* I just want them to be happy again!
This is driving us crazy, ok what the hell are both of them want. Please let them talk and work thing out and be together. Ok post soon please, thanks! Oh I like the kids name, Laurel and Jennifer is beautiful names!