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Janice: I ponder the best answer to this question. “I do find you attractive, you this already Bette. To answer your question, I came because I care about you. I am concerned you are not OK.”
Bette: “Not OK?” I enquire.
Janice: “I don’t know what happened Bette, you haven’t told me but last time I spoke to you, things with Tina were great, and now, I don’t know, you seem unhappy.”
Bette: I try to lead Janice back into the pool.
Janice: “Bette, no. I think I should go.”
Bette: “Stay, please.”
Janice: “Bette” and I pull away from Bette’s hand “I am not doing this, not here, not now.” Bette: I forget I am naked in the pool and put my hands on my hips. “Not doing what?” I say annoyed as Janice makes her way out of the pool. I hear Like a Bird on Wire playing in the background.
Janice: I pick up the towel and start to towel down, Bette stays in the pool. “Sleeping with you, here, now, in yours and Tina’s house, when tomorrow the woman you love more than life itself is coming home with your baby daughter.”
Bette: I get out of the pool and quickly dry off and slip my clothes on. Janice sits in her chair completely unmoved. The silence is deafening. “How would you know who I love?” I sound petulant.
Janice: “There is nothing wrong with wanting to be loved Bette.”
Bette: “Isn’t there? It hasn’t done me much good over the last few years.”
Janice: “What do you want Bette, from Tina?”
Bette: “I don’t know anymore.”
Janice: “So tell her that, maybe she feels the same way. I don’t know what happened Bette but either way being up front about where you are at and how you feel will make this easier for you and probably her too.”
Bette: “Tell her I don’t know how I feel?” I rest my head back on the chair, pondering what Janice said knowing she is right.
Janice: I nod into the silence, wishing I’d taken my own advice.
Morning comes and the light and noises of LA are not kind to me. I see the clock. “Shit.” And I roll over. I drag myself out of bed, make strong coffee and shower. I chastise myself for drinking so much last night. I take tow aspirin and head out to the car. I open the door and take a deep breath. One day at a time. I arrive at the hospital. I make my way up to Tina’s room to find that she is nearly packed.
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so screwed up, both of them…i leave it up to to make it right…and by that i mean B&T together of course LOL
I think Tina’s the wrong party, maybe she should open up first. If Tina didn’t have an affair, Bette wouldn’t make a move on Janice. I think she just wants Tina to care, to hurt. BTW, Janice is a great and wise woman. She turned Bette down twice, which is not easy to anybody.
tks for the update…but pls not long enough for even an appetizer!! pls post soon….This is a good story!!!
Bette already answered that question. Tina owes the answer here. Bette said she wanted her family, Tina said I don’t know, so Tina WHAT DO YOU WANT?!
I think its important for Tina to know how Bette found out, while searching the net for commitment rings. Tina also has to be honest about her disgust with Bette wanting sex with her, yet she’d leave Bette in bed to screw a guy online. I’m not sure Tina really gets how messed up things really are for Bette who not only could lose Tina, but the girls, in an “embarassing” way.
thanks for the update…looking forward to the next post!
Much prefer your story to S3! Thanks for writing.
unbeknown..I hope you get these two fucked up women straightened out. thanks for the great chapter
Unbeknown, thank you for the update, even if I think it’s a little cruel to end the chapter like this, allez, you probably forgot to post page 3, 4, 5, 6…and you’re gonna post them today :-) Did I mention lately j’adore cette version de B&T.
UnB, Oh my god, what a twist tale this has become. Thankfully Bette and Tina are talking and therefore I see some hope for the future. You often never know what you have until you almost lose it so please have Bette admit that she needs Tina. Bette needs to open up and be honest with Tina. Tina must listen to Bette and try to find the common ground to rebuild their union. Thank you for these wonderful words and storytelling. Your Loyal Fan.
what is happening to our couple(B/T)?please give us some hope there .read you tomorrow?
Great job. I am taken by the words we sometimes use and how they can haunt us. It seems that Bette may be haunted by her same words. How easy it is to throw them out when we don’t always understand their meanings. Thanks Unb for another great chapter
Cliff hangers are not fun! I think they both need to go out, have an affair and then go home to one another, compare notes and see what they really want. I wouldn’t do that, but at least they would have their answers! These two are seriously irking me off.Post soon.
Great update Unbeknown. If you don’t post more often I don’t think I’ll make it through S3. Umm, memo to Tina: It’s not enough to imply that you care because you say that you want to make it work. You should actually tell Bette that you care, you love her, you’re sorry, and you miss her. *Sigh* I just want them to be happy again!
This is driving us crazy, ok what the hell are both of them want. Please let them talk and work thing out and be together. Ok post soon please, thanks! Oh I like the kids name, Laurel and Jennifer is beautiful names!