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The Journey – FINAL CHAPTER
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Tina: I pull Bette’s head in close to mine. “Bette, please….”
Bette: I continue to kiss her breasts and tease her clit. I hear Tina take in a deep breath. “Tell me what you want” I whisper.
Tina: “Please Bette, I want to be yours……..”
Bette: I lay Tina down on her back on the bed and run my finger between her breast and over her belly button. “As you wish” I whisper. I lay on top of Tina and kiss her passionately and touch her breasts. I kiss her neck and make my way to kissing her breasts, slowly I run my tongue down to her sexy red undies which she has on. I smartly remove them. I slid my finger between her lips and feel how wet she is. I remove my hand and she groans, quickly I replace it with my tongue and slowly tease Tina, letting her know I am in complete control (this time anyway !). My tongue dances all around the spot I know she wants me to be and finally I give in and give Tina what she wants. She comes hard and fast and I know we have a long night ahead.
Tina: Bette and I have made love all night, taking turns in pleasing and pleasuring in each other and it makes me wonder how we even considered our lives without each other in them. Bette is resting on my chest, I know she is waiting for the sun to come up and then after that if I hold her she will fall asleep. I play with hair and she asks what I am thinking about.
Tina: “You” is my only answer.
Bette: The sun creeps up from below the horizon and there are a few clouds now and the odd drizzle of rain, too good for the weather to hold at this time of year. None the less the sun rise is also brilliant as ever with the sky contrasting the bright yellow and what looks like pink clouds, although of course they are not really pink.
Tina: “It’s beautiful”
Bette: I watch in silence and reach out to touch the window and trace the drizzle that runs down the window.
Tina: I watch Bette trace the rain on the outside of the window and she used to do that when she was sad. I get the feeling she is saying goodbye to something that offered her much comfort. I remember how she loved the rain hitting the tin roof.
Midday
Tina: Bette is fast asleep and I have let her go while I bathe the kids and pack the last few items. Today came so fast but I am excited to see everyone again and be in our house.
Bette: I roll over and feel that I am in the bed alone. I pick up the clock and look at it 12:09pm. “Fuck” I zoom out of bed to see Tina is completely organised. “Tee, why didn’t you wake me?” I asked concerned.
Tina: “We are organized babe, just have a shower and something to eat. I was going to get you up in a few minutes anyway.”
Bette: I look around and realise there is absolutely nothing else to do. I shower and eat and look out over the ocean. I head outside I guess to say goodbye to a place that bought me much comfort at the most difficult time in my life. “thankyou” I say out loud and wipe the tear away knowing it will be hard to leave and a long time before I am back again.
Tina: I watch Bette out the window for a few minutes and make my way out. “Bette, are you OK ?”
Bette: I smile and simultaneously wipe the tear away. “I am Tee, really, I’m OK.”
Tina: “Do you need some time on your own?”
Bette: I reach out take Tee’s hand in mine. “No, no, I don’t.”
Bette: “Come on let’s go home Tee.”
Tina: “Are you ready, I mean ready to leave and ready to be home………”
Bette: “Shhhh” I put my finger over Tee’s mouth. “I have never been more ready in my life. Let’s go home Tee.” We turned and made our way to the car.
THE END
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I’m a big fan of your writing, and have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially liked the struggle to reunite in the 30’s. Your style of writing makes it easy to follow who is thinking and saying what. Best of luck in your new venture and thanks for writing!
Thank you, I loved your story from beginning to endHope you have a new one one day.
it was a great journey, thank you
Thoroughly enjoyable. Good luck in your new job.
What a great story was with from the begining to the end. Sooo glad it was a happy ending
Lovely writing, great story, loved the ending. Thanks for finishing up so nicely. Good luck.
thank you, this story was wonderful, i hope you will find time to write more
Wonderful ending and lovely, love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one soon for us, thanks! Good luck and take care, see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the great story. I hope you enjoy your new position and will return to fan ficion one day in the near future.
They are home at least in their hearts. When they get to the house that they call home their hearts would have already reached that state and they can build upon that foundation. I am sad that you will be taking a break but understand that life takes precedence over FF. I hope that one day you will return to FF and make my Tibette soar again.
Beautiful ending, thanks.
Great ending to a great story. Thanks.
Lovely story – wonderful ending! Good luck with your new venture.
i have been a fan of yours for a long time this story has made me realize alot about love and i wanted to thankyou so much for sharing your work with me and the rest of the world…. i hope to see some more of your writing ur very talanted…once again thankyou so much you… and good luck…
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new position. I hope you will find the time to post again, you have a gift :). Thanks.
unbeknown, thank you very much for taking the time to end this story and thank you for writing it, it was absolutely beautiful. Sometime I hope selfishly that you don’t have to work or play tenis or do anything else than to write, I’m very bad, sorry, but “the end” are two words too sad to read, and I really hope S4 will give you inspiration again (or maybe you will write a book ;-) Again, thank you for your talent and for offering it to us :-) You are the best !
Ahh that was so beautiful. I so love how you write. Best of luck in your new position I pray you will master it soon so you may find the time to come back with more of your wonderful stories. Thanks for finishing this
What a wonderful ending. I read and love the story all along. Hope we could see you coming up with a new story in no time. :D
Hey unbeknown, That was a perfect way to sign off this story. I wish you the best of luck in your new position and do hope that it affords you some time to writie. Given your talent it would be unfortunate if you could not continue to create there fabulous fan fictions. The road has been rocky for Bette and Tina however their love never doubted a reunion of bodis, minds and souls. And so it was. Awesome. Many thanks for all these trials and tribulations. Your Loyal Fan.
I love everything you write and thank you for completing the story. I trust your new position will be fulfilling and await your return.
What a great way to end the story. I have enjoyed every chapter… I hope you can find some time in the near futur to write another. Thanks a bunch.
I am a big fan of yours. This story has been is wonderful. Thank you for all the time you put into it. Hope we get a new story one day. Thank you again
UB thank you for sharing this with us and thank you for finishing it in such a wonderful way. Written beautifully as always. Congratulations on your new position! I am hopeful that you will find the inspiration and the time to share more of your talents with us in the future. In the meantime, take care and good luck!
This has been an amazing story. I feel honored to have read it. Your writing is so wonderful, I will miss this story I am so happy you gave them a happy ending. I hope you find some time to write for us in the future. I wish you well on your new position.