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The Journey – FINAL CHAPTER
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Bette: “Laurel honey there is something we want to talk to you about” Laurel just looks and waits.
Tina: “We know sweetie that you thought that maybe your mum’s wouldn’t live together, but we want you to know that you don’t have to worry about that, we are all going to be living together, as a family for a very long time.”
Bette: “That’s right, won’t that be great, all of us and choco too. We know that things have been very hard and confusing for you but we both love you and each other very much.”
Tina: “And we are sorry it’s been hard on you, but we have a surprise for you, we are going back to LA tomorrow.” And in that instant I see Laurel look to Bette, not quite the reaction I expected.
Laurel: Sits up and whispers in Bette’s ear. “But I like it here.”
Bette: And I realise Laurel has the same love of this place that I do. “Me too”, I whisper back “but what about pre school, and the house and seeing Aunty Kit, Alice, Shane and Jenny.”
Laurel: A big smile spreads across her face “OK then, let’s go.”
Bette: I end up reading 3 stories and Laurel is asleep by then end of the last one. Finally Tina and I have some time on our own. I hear Tee in the shower and decide I should join her. I mean it’s our last night here together and all. I make my way into the bathroom. “Mind if I join you?” And Tee’s head whips out from the shower curtain.
Tina: “Not one bit.”
Bette: I hop in behind Tina and let the water spray down on my face, pressing into Tina. Tee has the shower hot.
Tina: “Make love to me Bette.” It’s not a question.
Bette: Tina grabs my hand places it where she wants it. I kiss her neck and can tell she is aroused. She puts her left hand out to stablize her and mine follows, entwining our fingers. Tina is starting to moan and even I am surprised just how aroused she is. I kiss her neck harder and know it will leave a mark and touch her harder and faster. It’s only minutes before she comes. Afterwards I wash her back and sensually touch her breasts and run my hands over her appreciatively.
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I’m a big fan of your writing, and have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially liked the struggle to reunite in the 30’s. Your style of writing makes it easy to follow who is thinking and saying what. Best of luck in your new venture and thanks for writing!
Thank you, I loved your story from beginning to endHope you have a new one one day.
it was a great journey, thank you
Thoroughly enjoyable. Good luck in your new job.
What a great story was with from the begining to the end. Sooo glad it was a happy ending
Lovely writing, great story, loved the ending. Thanks for finishing up so nicely. Good luck.
thank you, this story was wonderful, i hope you will find time to write more
Wonderful ending and lovely, love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one soon for us, thanks! Good luck and take care, see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the great story. I hope you enjoy your new position and will return to fan ficion one day in the near future.
They are home at least in their hearts. When they get to the house that they call home their hearts would have already reached that state and they can build upon that foundation. I am sad that you will be taking a break but understand that life takes precedence over FF. I hope that one day you will return to FF and make my Tibette soar again.
Beautiful ending, thanks.
Great ending to a great story. Thanks.
Lovely story – wonderful ending! Good luck with your new venture.
i have been a fan of yours for a long time this story has made me realize alot about love and i wanted to thankyou so much for sharing your work with me and the rest of the world…. i hope to see some more of your writing ur very talanted…once again thankyou so much you… and good luck…
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new position. I hope you will find the time to post again, you have a gift :). Thanks.
unbeknown, thank you very much for taking the time to end this story and thank you for writing it, it was absolutely beautiful. Sometime I hope selfishly that you don’t have to work or play tenis or do anything else than to write, I’m very bad, sorry, but “the end” are two words too sad to read, and I really hope S4 will give you inspiration again (or maybe you will write a book ;-) Again, thank you for your talent and for offering it to us :-) You are the best !
Ahh that was so beautiful. I so love how you write. Best of luck in your new position I pray you will master it soon so you may find the time to come back with more of your wonderful stories. Thanks for finishing this
What a wonderful ending. I read and love the story all along. Hope we could see you coming up with a new story in no time. :D
Hey unbeknown, That was a perfect way to sign off this story. I wish you the best of luck in your new position and do hope that it affords you some time to writie. Given your talent it would be unfortunate if you could not continue to create there fabulous fan fictions. The road has been rocky for Bette and Tina however their love never doubted a reunion of bodis, minds and souls. And so it was. Awesome. Many thanks for all these trials and tribulations. Your Loyal Fan.
I love everything you write and thank you for completing the story. I trust your new position will be fulfilling and await your return.
What a great way to end the story. I have enjoyed every chapter… I hope you can find some time in the near futur to write another. Thanks a bunch.
I am a big fan of yours. This story has been is wonderful. Thank you for all the time you put into it. Hope we get a new story one day. Thank you again
UB thank you for sharing this with us and thank you for finishing it in such a wonderful way. Written beautifully as always. Congratulations on your new position! I am hopeful that you will find the inspiration and the time to share more of your talents with us in the future. In the meantime, take care and good luck!
This has been an amazing story. I feel honored to have read it. Your writing is so wonderful, I will miss this story I am so happy you gave them a happy ending. I hope you find some time to write for us in the future. I wish you well on your new position.