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The L Wing chapter 183
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should talk to Carmen – oh God speaking of which “
Carmen walks in a few minutes behind Shane and I hurry across to see my now monster size Chief of Staff.
“You might have warned me “
“Top secret – arranged with CJ – Bette was thrilled when we told her “
“It’s terrific – how are you – God you are even bigger than two weeks ago “
“Six weeks to go “
“Are you going to last that long ? “
“I hope not. I’m not sleeping much because she is kicking so much “
“What have the doctors said ? “
“Perfectly normal – she is fine and so am I “
“How’s Shane ? “
We take a few steps away so our conversation cannot be overheard. I am concerned because Carmen had told me that Shane was getting help from the same trauma counsellor who did so much for me.
“She has bad nights – really bad nights “
“Nightmares ?” I know only too well how hard that can be for the person who is suffering from them and the person who has to witness their loved one in so much anguish. Carmen nods
“You need to talk to someone who has gone through it ?”
She nods “ When the fuss dies down we’ll talk. I know Bette wants to make a policy speech
later but she is getting a lot of hassle. They will want to go off and discuss it . Is Bette including Shane in many things ? “
“Tells her just about everything – with CJ’s knowledge may I add. Shane and CJ have become
really pals. “
“Hey there Tina – God I love looking at pregnant women “
Shane slowly comes towards me – I embrace her careful not to harm her ribs or cause her to topple over with her crutches.
“You have put weight on Shane – I would never have thought it possible but you have “
“Try saying no to Carmen’s mom and sisters – its impossible “
“We might need to get them in to cater for a dinner for us sometime – it would be a hoot “
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Way to leave us hanging ally I didn’t even see it comming. Well I know you will put us out of our misery when you get a chance and and I see my favorite of the three AYNIL is next so I wont beg to much but please let it be soon.
ally…you are very creative and imaginative to keep this story coherent yet fresh every chapter.
3lbs and 3 ozs is not so bad. I guess all the stress was too much for Carmen and the baby. Poor Shane..one more thing to worry about.
So I’m reading along loving the dialogue and all the time thinking this is “ally’ we are talking about when is some drama going to hit the fan…and then it did. You are the queen!
Great one AllyE. Happy that Shane is up and around and the baby only 3.3. With Carmen as big as a house, looks like we may have problems there. Hope it is not toxczemia.(sp)?. But that would explain the low weight and Carmen’s size. Hope everything is ok with Carmen, they don’t need those kind of problems right now. PPS.
WOW!!!! The Drama Queen is back and with full force. I do hope that the baby and Carmen are going to be fine. Please do not let Shane have her melt down just yet. I do hope that Tina can handle it. Thanks PPS
was so enjoying the chapter at first then the anvil. but 6 weeks. i like her chances also. my daughter has about a week to go. it will be my 3rd grandchild. cool. thanks.
a/e–A friend of mine had her first grandchild–a definite preemie, weighing in at just under 2 pounds at birth!! He is a real fighter and he is doing remarkably well. Thank you for continuing this story–this story concept has always been brilliant.
Good chapter. Good news Shane and Carmen welcome their new baby and hope Carmen and the baby are find. No drama please. Please post soon, thanks!
Damm Lady, you dropped a bomb on us. I love your stories and think you must be a very wise woman. And did you say we’re waiting for Tues. for another chapter, dang my nickers will be in a knot. Md
Gee, Ally, that wasn’t very nice of you dropping all that extra stress on Shane and Carmen (not to mention Bette & Tina and all of us.) But 6 weeks early? I like the kids chances.
wow 3lb 3ozs, i thought the doc said she was fine. would they have picked up that she was under weight during the ultrasound. guess she was gonna be small anyway. maybe she would have picked up another 2 or 3 in those six weeks. i wonder if carmen’s mom was obsessing about her eating as much as she was shane
great chapter, Bette is so lucky to have Tina beside her. Carmen and Shane’s baby is in the hospital i hope that everything will be ok for the little one.
Brilliant chapter, as always. Fantastic how you keep this story in top form… so intriguing, yet sweet and loving at the same time. Looking forward to the updates of the other two!!
A wonderful birthday present, thank you so much
Hey Ally, Good to see the comings and goings of the White House. I just love these intimate moments between all the characters. The dialogue just rolls along. Am in shock at your latest cliffhanger. I do hope that all is weel with Carmen and the baby. This will be a further shock for Shane and potentially for Tina. Bette needs to play this one out carefully. Brilliant as always, Your Loyal Fan.
Seems like the new team is good. But I hope that at the same time Bette is giving time to Shane for her recovery, she’s not let CJ to replace her completely. Shane is very intelligent, wise and thoughtful to me and I think she deserves even better than being a Chief of Staff (VP?)I like you write Joyce as one of the senior staff, I like this character. Great job and look forward to your next update!