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The L Wing chapter 183
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“I am NOT coming back to work if her mom follows me “
“Well behave or I can get Bette to hire her. I can get her to do most things “
Bette hears the last statement and laughs “ You always could – was that you coming onto my wife McCutcheon ?- Remember I have people who can break the legs again and the crutches – usually for less than chatting up Tina “
There is a good atmosphere between us and it feels good. But we are in the middle of a huge political fund-raiser and even very pregnant women and still recovering Chiefs of Staff have to sing for their suppers. We split up after a few more minutes’ conversation and start working the room. I talk to industrialists from Alabama and democratic fund raisers from Chicago – it’s not hard but the heat of the room and my size mean that I flag very rapidly and when it comes time to eat I want to throw up. Bette wants me to go home but I know that if I get some fresh air and escape the room for ten minutes I will be fine. I am just sitting outside the hotel on a seat facing their water fountain which unfortunately is turned on when Carmen comes outside and sits beside me
“You feeling the heat ? “
“No – the smell of salmon makes me want to heave so I saw you escape and decided to join you “
“How’s Shane doing ? “
“The phrase is something to do with pig and muck “
“How much longer is she supposed to be staying away from work ?”
“Three months “
“How long do you give her ?”
“She will take the full three months Tina – she couldn’t take the pressure of the job full time “
“I found it very hard – not the physical demands – I was only a few weeks pregnant but the mental strain was hard to deal with. I mean – I was Press Secretary for a few months and I made sure that First Lady was a title that got me the attention of the people I wanted and you know how hard we have worked but – gee it was tough “
“And you were at the heart of getting Shane out . We haven’t talked about it “
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Way to leave us hanging ally I didn’t even see it comming. Well I know you will put us out of our misery when you get a chance and and I see my favorite of the three AYNIL is next so I wont beg to much but please let it be soon.
ally…you are very creative and imaginative to keep this story coherent yet fresh every chapter.
3lbs and 3 ozs is not so bad. I guess all the stress was too much for Carmen and the baby. Poor Shane..one more thing to worry about.
So I’m reading along loving the dialogue and all the time thinking this is “ally’ we are talking about when is some drama going to hit the fan…and then it did. You are the queen!
Great one AllyE. Happy that Shane is up and around and the baby only 3.3. With Carmen as big as a house, looks like we may have problems there. Hope it is not toxczemia.(sp)?. But that would explain the low weight and Carmen’s size. Hope everything is ok with Carmen, they don’t need those kind of problems right now. PPS.
WOW!!!! The Drama Queen is back and with full force. I do hope that the baby and Carmen are going to be fine. Please do not let Shane have her melt down just yet. I do hope that Tina can handle it. Thanks PPS
was so enjoying the chapter at first then the anvil. but 6 weeks. i like her chances also. my daughter has about a week to go. it will be my 3rd grandchild. cool. thanks.
a/e–A friend of mine had her first grandchild–a definite preemie, weighing in at just under 2 pounds at birth!! He is a real fighter and he is doing remarkably well. Thank you for continuing this story–this story concept has always been brilliant.
Good chapter. Good news Shane and Carmen welcome their new baby and hope Carmen and the baby are find. No drama please. Please post soon, thanks!
Damm Lady, you dropped a bomb on us. I love your stories and think you must be a very wise woman. And did you say we’re waiting for Tues. for another chapter, dang my nickers will be in a knot. Md
Gee, Ally, that wasn’t very nice of you dropping all that extra stress on Shane and Carmen (not to mention Bette & Tina and all of us.) But 6 weeks early? I like the kids chances.
wow 3lb 3ozs, i thought the doc said she was fine. would they have picked up that she was under weight during the ultrasound. guess she was gonna be small anyway. maybe she would have picked up another 2 or 3 in those six weeks. i wonder if carmen’s mom was obsessing about her eating as much as she was shane
great chapter, Bette is so lucky to have Tina beside her. Carmen and Shane’s baby is in the hospital i hope that everything will be ok for the little one.
Brilliant chapter, as always. Fantastic how you keep this story in top form… so intriguing, yet sweet and loving at the same time. Looking forward to the updates of the other two!!
A wonderful birthday present, thank you so much
Hey Ally, Good to see the comings and goings of the White House. I just love these intimate moments between all the characters. The dialogue just rolls along. Am in shock at your latest cliffhanger. I do hope that all is weel with Carmen and the baby. This will be a further shock for Shane and potentially for Tina. Bette needs to play this one out carefully. Brilliant as always, Your Loyal Fan.
Seems like the new team is good. But I hope that at the same time Bette is giving time to Shane for her recovery, she’s not let CJ to replace her completely. Shane is very intelligent, wise and thoughtful to me and I think she deserves even better than being a Chief of Staff (VP?)I like you write Joyce as one of the senior staff, I like this character. Great job and look forward to your next update!