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The L Wing chapter 183
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“I don’t see it personally “
“Because if you did you would get paranoid “ Carmen teases
I laugh “ Hell right “
Bette suddenly glances to her right and finally looks behind her and sees me
“That is scary Tina “
“That is what we have – it’s something that cannot be explained logically “
Carmen smiles “ Bette’s coming over – can you have a word with her about Shane ? “
“Of course – where is your missus anyway?”
“With CJ sitting at the table “
“You better check on her “
“I will – see you later Tina – and thanks – talking to you helps me so much”
“I feel the same “
“Hey Carmen – Shane is over there “ Bette comes across
“I know – just going to check on her Madam President “
“Its good to see you looking so fantastic Carmen “
“Thank you – Tina and I have been discussing motherhood “
“So have Shane and I “ Bette grins
When Carmen is out of earshot I take Bette by the hand and lead her outside for a few minutes
“Why do I think that you and Shane are incapable of talking about politics long enough even to discuss your pregnant partners “
I know it’s a harsh statement and I haven’t put it well but luckily I hit a nerve with Bette and she gives me a sheepish look.
“We are both looking forward to it “ she defends herself
“Did you even ask her how she was ?”
Bette goes from sheepish to apologetic
“I always do – but we were so busy discussing the speech “
“Bette – she is probably drugged to her eyeballs and you are talking about your speech which you know you are not going to be able to make “
“Tina ! “
“You knew it all along – it’s a great policy and I think you are right to want to bring it in but at this moment – the way the political climate is at the moment you can’t. The party is too twitchy about all sorts of things and bringing this is just gives the Republicans too much ammo. Its beginning to dawn on the party that there isn’t an obvious successor to you and they think they are going to get creamed – how am I doing ?”
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Way to leave us hanging ally I didn’t even see it comming. Well I know you will put us out of our misery when you get a chance and and I see my favorite of the three AYNIL is next so I wont beg to much but please let it be soon.
ally…you are very creative and imaginative to keep this story coherent yet fresh every chapter.
3lbs and 3 ozs is not so bad. I guess all the stress was too much for Carmen and the baby. Poor Shane..one more thing to worry about.
So I’m reading along loving the dialogue and all the time thinking this is “ally’ we are talking about when is some drama going to hit the fan…and then it did. You are the queen!
Great one AllyE. Happy that Shane is up and around and the baby only 3.3. With Carmen as big as a house, looks like we may have problems there. Hope it is not toxczemia.(sp)?. But that would explain the low weight and Carmen’s size. Hope everything is ok with Carmen, they don’t need those kind of problems right now. PPS.
WOW!!!! The Drama Queen is back and with full force. I do hope that the baby and Carmen are going to be fine. Please do not let Shane have her melt down just yet. I do hope that Tina can handle it. Thanks PPS
was so enjoying the chapter at first then the anvil. but 6 weeks. i like her chances also. my daughter has about a week to go. it will be my 3rd grandchild. cool. thanks.
a/e–A friend of mine had her first grandchild–a definite preemie, weighing in at just under 2 pounds at birth!! He is a real fighter and he is doing remarkably well. Thank you for continuing this story–this story concept has always been brilliant.
Good chapter. Good news Shane and Carmen welcome their new baby and hope Carmen and the baby are find. No drama please. Please post soon, thanks!
Damm Lady, you dropped a bomb on us. I love your stories and think you must be a very wise woman. And did you say we’re waiting for Tues. for another chapter, dang my nickers will be in a knot. Md
Gee, Ally, that wasn’t very nice of you dropping all that extra stress on Shane and Carmen (not to mention Bette & Tina and all of us.) But 6 weeks early? I like the kids chances.
wow 3lb 3ozs, i thought the doc said she was fine. would they have picked up that she was under weight during the ultrasound. guess she was gonna be small anyway. maybe she would have picked up another 2 or 3 in those six weeks. i wonder if carmen’s mom was obsessing about her eating as much as she was shane
great chapter, Bette is so lucky to have Tina beside her. Carmen and Shane’s baby is in the hospital i hope that everything will be ok for the little one.
Brilliant chapter, as always. Fantastic how you keep this story in top form… so intriguing, yet sweet and loving at the same time. Looking forward to the updates of the other two!!
A wonderful birthday present, thank you so much
Hey Ally, Good to see the comings and goings of the White House. I just love these intimate moments between all the characters. The dialogue just rolls along. Am in shock at your latest cliffhanger. I do hope that all is weel with Carmen and the baby. This will be a further shock for Shane and potentially for Tina. Bette needs to play this one out carefully. Brilliant as always, Your Loyal Fan.
Seems like the new team is good. But I hope that at the same time Bette is giving time to Shane for her recovery, she’s not let CJ to replace her completely. Shane is very intelligent, wise and thoughtful to me and I think she deserves even better than being a Chief of Staff (VP?)I like you write Joyce as one of the senior staff, I like this character. Great job and look forward to your next update!