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The L Wing chapter 183
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“Shane is not as reluctant as that – but it is a struggle to get her there. That’s one of the reasons I don’t want her back at work. She will get swept up in the job and not attend her sessions plus the way she is – Tina – she couldn’t do her job “
“Do you think that she wants to come back ?”
“Yes I do Tina – and I think that if Bette shows the slightest sign of wanting her back that will
be the excuse that she needs – Bette needs me – she is longing to hear Bette say that to her “
“She won’t “
“Tina – how sure are you about that ?”
“You think Bette is going to ask her to come back ? “
Carmen rests her hand on her tummy “ I bet your daughter isn’t as active as this “
She takes my hand and I feel her tummy moving with the very vigorous force of her daughter.
Hell that is no way as bouncy as our baby
“And how often does she do that ? “
“A few times a day but she saves her best floor shows for about 2am “
“God – how much sleep are you getting ? “
“About 4 hours during the night and 4 hours during the day – luckily because of my mom fussing over her Shane has took to having an lie down about 2pm just so she doesn’t have to eat “
I laugh – I know it’s not funny but it is
“And that would end if she came back to work as well. I am pleading with you to talk to Bette for me Tina “
“Don’t worry Carmen – she will not bring Shane back as much as Shane begs and pleads or she will be in very hot water with me”
“Thanks Tina – what’s the gossip around the place ? – cheer me with stories about people who don’t spend every night watching movies in bed “
“That’s all you do ? “
“Its all Shane has wanted to do since the accident – we’re in one of those online DVD hire clubs
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Way to leave us hanging ally I didn’t even see it comming. Well I know you will put us out of our misery when you get a chance and and I see my favorite of the three AYNIL is next so I wont beg to much but please let it be soon.
ally…you are very creative and imaginative to keep this story coherent yet fresh every chapter.
3lbs and 3 ozs is not so bad. I guess all the stress was too much for Carmen and the baby. Poor Shane..one more thing to worry about.
So I’m reading along loving the dialogue and all the time thinking this is “ally’ we are talking about when is some drama going to hit the fan…and then it did. You are the queen!
Great one AllyE. Happy that Shane is up and around and the baby only 3.3. With Carmen as big as a house, looks like we may have problems there. Hope it is not toxczemia.(sp)?. But that would explain the low weight and Carmen’s size. Hope everything is ok with Carmen, they don’t need those kind of problems right now. PPS.
WOW!!!! The Drama Queen is back and with full force. I do hope that the baby and Carmen are going to be fine. Please do not let Shane have her melt down just yet. I do hope that Tina can handle it. Thanks PPS
was so enjoying the chapter at first then the anvil. but 6 weeks. i like her chances also. my daughter has about a week to go. it will be my 3rd grandchild. cool. thanks.
a/e–A friend of mine had her first grandchild–a definite preemie, weighing in at just under 2 pounds at birth!! He is a real fighter and he is doing remarkably well. Thank you for continuing this story–this story concept has always been brilliant.
Good chapter. Good news Shane and Carmen welcome their new baby and hope Carmen and the baby are find. No drama please. Please post soon, thanks!
Damm Lady, you dropped a bomb on us. I love your stories and think you must be a very wise woman. And did you say we’re waiting for Tues. for another chapter, dang my nickers will be in a knot. Md
Gee, Ally, that wasn’t very nice of you dropping all that extra stress on Shane and Carmen (not to mention Bette & Tina and all of us.) But 6 weeks early? I like the kids chances.
wow 3lb 3ozs, i thought the doc said she was fine. would they have picked up that she was under weight during the ultrasound. guess she was gonna be small anyway. maybe she would have picked up another 2 or 3 in those six weeks. i wonder if carmen’s mom was obsessing about her eating as much as she was shane
great chapter, Bette is so lucky to have Tina beside her. Carmen and Shane’s baby is in the hospital i hope that everything will be ok for the little one.
Brilliant chapter, as always. Fantastic how you keep this story in top form… so intriguing, yet sweet and loving at the same time. Looking forward to the updates of the other two!!
A wonderful birthday present, thank you so much
Hey Ally, Good to see the comings and goings of the White House. I just love these intimate moments between all the characters. The dialogue just rolls along. Am in shock at your latest cliffhanger. I do hope that all is weel with Carmen and the baby. This will be a further shock for Shane and potentially for Tina. Bette needs to play this one out carefully. Brilliant as always, Your Loyal Fan.
Seems like the new team is good. But I hope that at the same time Bette is giving time to Shane for her recovery, she’s not let CJ to replace her completely. Shane is very intelligent, wise and thoughtful to me and I think she deserves even better than being a Chief of Staff (VP?)I like you write Joyce as one of the senior staff, I like this character. Great job and look forward to your next update!