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The L Wing – Chapter 188
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“I am happy where you are and where our miracle is “”
“Well we come as a double act at the moment “
“Kennard and Kid “I joke and we both laugh.
We chat about all sorts of things until I park the car in the drive of her parents place. Since I first came here they have spent a fair bit of money on the property – new drive way to park the cars, better fencing and a couple of CCTV cameras linked to a nearby security firm –that was paid for by the Government – after all they are the parents of the First Lady and they merit protection – nothing too high profile but there all the same.
I get out of the car and move round to help Tina out of the passenger side. She looks great – flattering dark trousers and a baggy white shirt that hides how big she is starting to get. She takes my hand and we stand together for a few seconds
“Just so as you know – you are beautiful “I tell her
“So are you – you should wear jeans more often – especially tight ones “
“Yes Madam First Lady “
She laughs and I put my arm around her waist as we walk up the path. The door opens and her dad appears. He’s in black trousers, a white shirt and a blue tie – obviously under orders from Emma. He stands and beams at us
“Hey there “
“Hi dad “
He runs down the steps and greets Tina with an enormous hug
“How are you feeling honey – I hope its not to hot for you – can I help you with anything?”
“Dad I’m fine “
He looks at me “Hey Bette – how’s she doing?”
“She is standing next to her “Tina replies
I laugh – he is going to get into such trouble for fussing over her – it will make a change from me getting into trouble for fussing too much. We go into the house and the smells just take over – we are having beef – yes definitely beef – I can smell it cooking.
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it’s sex on wheels….Alana is it?? man Al and Helena are so gonna be pissed and Lucy did not learn did she!!!! rmao.
could it be the Jane Bond from the white house..u no Tina’s nemisis at the moment..Great chapter…u have to post soon…
I say one word – chliffhanger. I hate this. HOW is this Girl? Now I must wait so long of the next chapter. GRRR. I think it’s Bette’s little Sister or no way, this were terrible – Alice LOL
good girl ( hey my comments box is working !! ) – the last time i checked i was VERY English. I am sitting her chuckling at everyone’s comments. and yes — writing a sex scene can just creep up on you. its becuase i have never heard of planning a chapter !!! hugs xx
Ok. It’s either Alana or Leigh. Either one is like putting the cat amongst the pidgeon’s. LOL. love it. As for the NC-17’s you are great at writing them.
That was an awesome sex scene b/c it was so spontaneous. Raw yet tender. It is very difficult to write sex scenes so that they are sexy, not trite or crude or redundant/boring if you’ve written them before. This one was excellent. PPS. Wouldn’t Alana be much older than Lucy? I am glad Lucy didn’t have a car accident.
ok, first of all what is this talk of no more nc-17 chapters. why would you stop, you are one of the best with them on this site! any who, about the chapter, my first thought was it is alana, but I think it is closer to home. I think Bette’s sister and Tina’s sister makes more sense.
Hey Ally, Thank you so much for that update. The worst thing was the ending. I really want to know who Lucy has brought with her. As for the rest of the chapter. Great to see the acceptance from Tina’s mom. It has been a hard fought journey but she is now able to see the the love and joy that Bette has brought to Tina’s life. When something is just meant to be you had to surrender to it. Bette and Tina’s afternoon nap was very pleaseureable especially the Lock the Door conversation. Just shows that even the POTUS is a the beck and call of her wife’s hormone. Hysterical. Thank you so much for this intriguing chapter. Much gratitude anad appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
Whew. I read the comments above mine and was relieved to see the guesses that it is Leigh or Alana, much better than my guess that is is Alice. I like this story the best of your three and I think it is because of lines like “I am a very happy President.” It is so much fun to picture Bette saying that. The other thing I love is how far you make me willing to suspend belief and the parts that strain my credulity. I have accepted that Bette is President. It is easy to accept Peggy as VP. Tina as First Lady, a former Press Secretary–I can see it. Shane as Chief of Staff–um OK. Alice on Senior Sraff–that is a little harder, but OK. Helena as a former US Senator in recovery–why not? But when this chapter opened with Bette driving on a public road, I was incredulous–“no president could do that!!!!!” LOL. Of all the things to get hung up on!!!!
Your chapters are always so fun to read Ally. I just have to keep reminding myself that an English woman is writing it! LOL As yummy as it sounds I don’t know of anyone here who has a traditional Sunday lunch of roast beef, veggies, mash potatoes and Yorkshire pudding!! But then again, I am a West Coast girl…maybe they have those on the East Coast! Thanks!!
cliffhanger indeed…please post soon, can’t wait!
Oh my, I can’t even guess who it might be, so I will wait and see like everyone else. Great chapter by the way, AllyE. PPS.
I hope it is Bette’s half sister because she could whip Lucy into shape and become a more sensible and responisble person too! By the way, the sex scene was hot!!!
Don’t worry that it’s NC-17. You actually know how to write a story with a plot so it’s not like you’re writing sex all the time. Okay I’ll actually read this later and leave another comment. :D
I would like for it to be Bette’s baby sis, she would be good for Lucy maybe calm her down a bit. By the same token I hope it’s not the spy that would be too uncomfortable for both B&T. Maybe Lucy will start to grow up soon and act like the adult she should be. PPS can’t wait to see who the mystery lady is.
I guess alice but there is no telling pps
My oh my…friendly attacks! NC’s are hard to write, I admit it, as I’m working on one right now! Mate…you rock and I love this story! I know you know that!
That wasnt a very nice place to leave us. Looking forward to more.
Such a tease Ally! I’m guessing Ms Bond… she’d probably get the biggest reaction. I like how your sex scene crept up on you. Very nice… something hot about having sex in your parents house on your childhood bed. Bring on the drama!
Well Lucy knows how to surprise people! I love the dialogue between Bette and Tom wonderful!
You write sex scenes really really really well- I am sorry they are difficult but appreciate that you let them flow. Now leaving us hanging that’s another matter. Really great chapter
WOW!!!!! The Queen of Drama is back at it again. Now who is the new girl? Thanks PPS
Now that you’ve got us all excited. I’m with the rest its either Ms. Bond or Bette’s sister. I think a Porter would be good for Lucy. Love how those two are having sex upstairs in Tina’s parents house.
mmmm intriguing…
What if it was Helena or JJ? lol Now I’m hungry for some home cooking and it’s only 9:41 AM.
you little dq you. can i see your dq hat??? ;) i love how sex just creeps up on you funnyone!!! great job. thanks.
Bette’s new half sister? hey I’m first!
have you been to England .Yorkshires puddings lol.
Good chapter. B&T are hot and sweet. Who the hell is Lucy bring here now, hope not bring drama. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Oh God yeah, I hate how those sex scenes creep up on you like that. So is the mystery date Alana (isn’t that spy woman’s name? See what happens when you don’t post so regularly?) Or just to really flip everybody out, has Lucy hooked up with Alice?
Hmm. I don’t know who it could be. Bette’s half sister is way too good for Lucy. Lucy acts like such an idiot. Not sure how good it would go over if its the spy. Weirdly I don’t think it would be so bad if it were Alice except that she is old.